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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part Two: Untouchable

Trickie Woo	2006.05.27 - 02:10AM	20: Not a Potion?	Signed
If everything will be explained soon, then make it ASAP, this left me even more confused. Why wait for june, why not do the spells now. Achlys had to die for her to become a part of Kestrel, right? Since she's going to die and be reborn in Kestrel, why not sooner rahter than later? Author's Response: I seem to be good at doing this. That bit about waiting for June, Kestrel did say that it would take at least a month and Achlys does have to teach. So therefore, and I know this from experience, there really isn't going to be much time to pay attention to a spell or any extracurricular things (I'm almost positive you know what I'm talking about!) That's what I meant. And Kestrel doesn't want the stuff to get mucked up. If there's one thing Severus taught her, it's patience. Kind of funny, thinking Severus has patience... We're about two-thirds of the way through. Or maybe just. scratches head Yeah. Half obsessed with fanfiction, half obsessed with architecture, half not good with fractions. :p Thanks, as always for your review and enlightening me that I really need to learn to phrase things better. -Mel

naughtygirl3000	2006.05.26 - 09:05AM	20: Not a Potion?	Signed
qrgh! you left us with a cliff hanger!! btw WOW!! that was amazing, i'm gonna b on edge now til the next chapter comes!! Author's Response: :p. I tend to do that... lol. Don't worry, the next chapter WILL ACTUALLY be here soon. gaspeth* Thanks for the review! -Sho*