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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Daughter of Light.

memory 2006.04.19 - 07:06PM 15: The End of the Beginning Anonymous
Sorry, it's always me... I just noticed I forgot to tell you something about the death of the two Weasleys (but are they really really really dead? How could you? I imagine I'm too soft hearted. To write a decent story you need probably to sacrify somebody, don't you?) Anyway, I was a little bit perplexed about Ron' reactions. Isn't he too calm? I would have imagined him more vehement in his grief. Just a thought, may be I missed something. And now my really really last comment: THANK YOU for writing stories with a C rating! so that I can share them with my oldest daughter too (I can't stand anymore SexGod Severus or SexAbuser/Abused Severus! I love this character the way he has been created...) Sorry for my outburst, didn't intend to insult anybody. Again regards.

memory 2006.04.19 - 06:44PM 15: The End of the Beginning Anonymous
Hi again! I'm enjoying the story, even if the chapters come out a bit slowly for my reading speed... Anyway, I know that is impossible to accelerate the process and, on the other side, the story lasts longer. Do my sentences make sense? OK, let's go on with the review. I like the characters and I think you did a good job to keep them in canon. Sometimes anyway, I feel that perhaps Harry is too "sweet" to be a 15 years old boy (my nephew is same age and a little bit bolder, even if he is a dear boy), and sometimes also Severus is too easily showing his emotions. But I guess that it must be difficult to deal with a character like Snape, because in the books he is always scowling, barking, spitting, howling, scolding and so on. (I've learned a lot of verbs basically meaning the same concept). In the books it's quite impossible to see Snape having a normal conversation (blessed HBP, in which we find at least the meeting with Narcissa and Bellatrix and we can finally discover how is Snape when talking normally..well, normally for him, of course). These considerations apart, I do love your prose and I believe it's also helping me a lot to improve my english... well, at least I hope it. So, many thanks. I trustingly wait for the new entries, as soon as possible. Ciao!

snapehp 2006.04.18 - 06:02PM 15: The End of the Beginning Signed
I am glad to see the update! I was worried for a bit! Poor Molly, she lost her husband and son. I hope things get better for the Order. I wonder what Severus can do, since he is no longer a spy. I'm sure I will find out if I keep reading :) Great chapter and I look forward to reading more!




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