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| EXECUTR | 2006.06.18 - 10:36AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Good chapter. Please keep writing. Author's Response: Thanks! I am revising the next chapter now. :) | |||
| LunaSnape | 2006.06.16 - 09:00PM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
| o.k. Even with the sexy beast that is severus' body i still would passout for even thinking I was having sex with Voldy. Eww! I loved how they confessed there love but it was soooooo sad! At least she can go back with Sev. Maybe a little affair is in order... hmmm... Me likey. HAha. Plz update as soon as you can, love the story. *LS* Author's Response: I'm so glad you are continuing to enjoy this story. It is not my usual style. It is sad for Severus and Janece to be apart. I feel sorry for them. The next chapter is in the revision process now. It should be done soon. Thanks very much for your review! :) | |||
| naughtygirl3000 | 2006.06.15 - 12:04PM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
| wow! seriously that is all I can say about that chapter! I can't wait for the next!! Author's Response: The next chapter is in the revision process now. It should be done soon. Thanks for the review! :) | |||
| anodyne | 2006.06.05 - 04:05PM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
| “What secondary Manor?” Malfoy owning a ~secondary~ Manor is probably one of the funniest things I’ve heard him own in a non-parody fanfiction; it is up there with the dark red alligator skin chaps I read about on another site. I’m sure that moment of humor in an otherwise tense chapter was unintentional, but I thought I’d let you know. It’s like, “Hey, yeah, we got the other place for the extra storage space because you know how much room those medieval torture devices take up, and frankly those totally unexpected visits from long lost relatives really grate on the nerves. Who wants to share their home with some weird aunt from America, anyway? We think of it as a very large attic/in-law apartment.” Author's Response: I must admit, I fail to see the humor in the Malfoys owning a secondary manor. It is not uncommon for the rich to own second homes in any culture. In this case, the secondary manor was simply how it was referred to by everyone. Perhaps if I had called it the unplottable manor, you would not have found it humorous. Please know that I am not offended or angry, I just fail to see how it could be considered humorous. I do appreciate your reading my story and taking the time to review. | |||
| Fionnait | 2006.05.27 - 12:58PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| There is absolutely no way that two blonde parents have a child with brown hair. It's simply genetically impossible. And Remus belongs with Tonks... Author's Response: Wrong. Genetics do not play a factor in hair color. Two types of melenin influence hair color: eumelanin and pheomelanin. http://www.thetech.org/genetics/ask.php?id=39 http://www.keratin.com/as/as005.shtml In the second article, it says: Blonde haired people have eumelanin in their hair fiber as for black haired people, but the eumelanin is present at a very low density. As you can see, blonde-haired people do carry the necessary pigments to produce a dark-haried child. As for Remus belonging with Tonks, that is your opinion. One that has nothing to do with this story. | |||
| mijita | 2006.05.21 - 11:15PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Lovely start. Nicely twisty. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. :) | |||
| JamesandLily4ever | 2006.05.17 - 06:08PM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
| Shea DUDE!!!!(Sorry, that's what one of my friends says when something cool happens in the stories that she reads...)
If Sev is present... she'll be saved!(If not....*gulp* I'd rather not think of it...)
Another amazing chapter, dear JenKM1216!! As I said before: Keep 'em chapters running(I've caught up now!)!!!
~J+L4ever Author's Response: Why thank you, my dear! I am absolutely thrilled that you think so. Your lovely reviews have been a ray of sunshine through a drab day. I'm so glad you are enjoying things, thus far. I will be submitting the next chapter soon. Hope you enjoy it! :) | |||
| JamesandLily4ever | 2006.05.17 - 05:42PM | 4: Chapter Three | Signed |
| Dear Merlin! Where has Jenece gone?!?!?!?!
You've got me amazed once more, JenKM1216!
Wonderful chapter, keep 'em chapters running(even if I'm trying to catch up!)!!!
~J+L4ever Author's Response: Where has she gone, indeed? You'll find out soon! I'm so glad you are continuing to enjoy my story. I must admit to a thrill up my spine that I have amazed you. Thanks so much for your lovely review. :) | |||
| JamesandLily4ever | 2006.05.17 - 05:28PM | 3: Chapter Two | Signed |
| DUDE!!! Go Draco, Go Draco, Go DRACO!!!
I'm very very amazed by this chapter.*shivers at the part where Lucious was raping someone else...*
Well, done! Keep the chapters going!
~J+L4ever! Author's Response: I was rather proud of Draco. He did a good job. I'm glad you are enjoying my story, if not Lucius' actions. *shudders* I don't like that part either and was surprised when I was done with it. Thanks for your review! :) | |||
| LunaSnape | 2006.05.12 - 10:25PM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
| First I must say.... EWWWWW, Mrs. Voldy. I would shot my self before I did that. I'm so excited. Keep them comin'. *LS* Author's Response: I know what you mean! I would not have been as strong a person. *gags* At least he's not all snake-like anymore. That would have been really gross. I'm so glad you like this story. And thanks for your review! :) | |||
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