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Reviews for Meant to be… Enemies

Verity Brown 2006.03.04 - 11:30PM 4: The Sorting Signed
So much neat stuff in this chapter. :~) Your Sorting Hat song sounds so authenic! And it's funny how Severus is starting to get annoyed with Lily's very female behavior. It's spooky seeing Lucius as a prefect. And Dumbledore's comments are spooky, too. And spookiest of all is the similarity of Severus' argument with the Sorting Hat to Harry's. Well done! I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I'd like to think that the hat wouldn't have put him in Slytherin right away. I really believe that one must almost ask to be put there. I loved writing the Sorting Hat song.

Verity Brown 2006.03.04 - 11:22PM 3: Already In Trouble Signed
"I don't approve of students who find others' punishments funny." I don't know why I love that line so much, but I do. It's so thoroughly...McGonagall.

It's kind of sad that he has to keep reminding himself that he has a friend. Poor boy!

Author's Response: He doesn't realize that girls count as friends... yet. I love McGonagall and really wanted to keep her IC.

Verity Brown 2006.03.04 - 11:19PM 2: The Journey to Hogwarts Signed
I feel so bad for him, listening to them talk about him that way! And poor Remus--he's being bullied as much as Severus is, really. What a shame! :~(

Author's Response: I had the impression that Severus and Remus could have been friendly. Remus was just too worried about maiking friends that he just went along with everything.

Puffeduppopinjay 2006.03.04 - 10:09PM 4: The Sorting Anonymous
What a great sorting hat song! I see that Bella's dislike and mistrust of Severus goes back all the way to Hogwarts days. continue? you better or I'll cry this is the first really good little Snape fic I've read.

Author's Response: There, there. Please don't cry. I'll continue. Promise!

Puffeduppopinjay 2006.03.04 - 10:03PM 3: Already In Trouble Anonymous
And the war begins. McGonagall strict but fair bless her.

Puffeduppopinjay 2006.03.04 - 09:54PM 2: The Journey to Hogwarts Anonymous
Preteen disaster at its finest! Poor kid at least he didn't chuck on her although doing so on Sirius and James would have funny. I like how wishy washy Remus tried to stick up for him. The ending with its little bit of I'm not old enough to know what romance is yet romance was so sweet.

Author's Response: Don't worry there is more preteen disaster to come. I always thought that Remus was the decent one of the bunch.

Puffeduppopinjay 2006.03.04 - 09:43PM 1: King's Cross Station Anonymous
The girl had two Muggle parents; he had one Muggle parent. Dear Merlin, being a half-blood made him only one step away from being a Mudblood himself! What an awful way for an 11 year old to learn about prejudice! Loved your explaination of how Snivellus came to be and how Lily became his friend.

Author's Response: Thanks and welcome aboard!

Owlbait 2006.03.04 - 08:26PM 2: The Journey to Hogwarts Signed
Sirius could probably have done with a few extra dunkings in the lake that he didn't get. The reference to Severus' old, written-in books was lovely.

Author's Response: Actually being held under until the bubbles stop would work, too. :)

Marina 2006.03.03 - 04:57PM 4: The Sorting Anonymous
By all means! :) Continue it, I mean! It's really great! Looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: The story will go on!

Lydia 2006.03.03 - 07:07AM 4: The Sorting Signed
Yes, please continue!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the works.

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