Reviews for Beholden To No Man
Trickie Woo |
2006.06.03 - 11:24PM |
11: Chapter 11 |
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Poor Severus, he may have grown a lot, but he's still a babe in the woods when it comes to sex. Aurelia was very pragmatic and realistic about it, since it was their first time together she knew it would only get better. Anyway, he had been celibate for so long it had to be all about him getting his sexual frustration out of his system. He had never had sex with a woman he loved before, so he was too inexperienced to know that. This is one place where he should let her take the lead.
She may have just been through a traumatic experience, but she did know that she wanted him and that she had already planned showing him that she wanted him in a sexual ways as well as for so many other reasons..Most important of all, they have both declared their love for the other.
He passed another milestone in his emotional growth when he went to Azkaban, even though Lucius taunted him he felt secure that she loved him. The old Snape would have fallen right into the trap Lucius was trying to set. I enjoyed what his modifications to the potion did to Lucius, he deserved that and mire.
Author's Response: "he's still a babe in the woods when it comes to sex" He really is, isn't he? Thankfully, he's found someone patient who will not make him feel inadequate. I decided to not take the fanfic cliche of sex being perfect and wonderful for the reasons you outlines. :)...Wasn't what he did to Lucius wonderful? I really enjoyed that since this Lucius is such a bastard. Normally, I don't advocate Lucius abuse. |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.23 - 05:51PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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I still wait for the next chapters...
This is Great!!!(Don't stop writing this fic!--update soon!!!!!!)
~Meli
P/s: I'm leaving reviews in the mean time...
Author's Response: Don't worry, I haven't stopped. I just had a pause in the action to take care of some other business. LOL It's my ADD muses. They had to run with a couple of other ideas, but they are ready to get back down to business here. :) |
amycnorm98 |
2006.05.22 - 01:37PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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They are so cute together and they play off eachother's strengths, adorable. However, I think that Aurelia will regret her decision if she gets into bed too quickly with Severus after her ordeal at Malfoy's hands.
Author's Response: Thanks amycnorm. I do think they do play off each other well, which has been the fun...and I do believe you are correct about regrets, but when will that realization happen? ;) |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.21 - 06:06PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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Whooo!!!!
Next chapter is very much anticipated here!!
~J+L4ever
P/s: Amazing chapter once again!!! :`>
Author's Response: Thanks, again. I'm so glad that you enjoy this story. I'm working as quickly as RL and finicky muses will let me. LOL |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.21 - 05:41PM |
9: Chapter 9 |
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YAY!! She's safe now!*whippes sweat off forehead*
Amazing and full of excitement! ----Sev was a hero again today!
~J+L4ever
P/s: keep those chapters coming!---this is very great!!!
Author's Response: You aren't the only one relieved that Severus showed up. Poor Aurelia was quite relieved, too. :) |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.21 - 03:53PM |
8: Chapter 8 |
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I'm very afraid! What's the truth?!
~J+L4ever
Author's Response: thanks J+L, I know you know the truth now, but I'm glad to see that this chapter did created drama and curiosity. Thanks for reviewing. |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.21 - 11:13AM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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dear Merlin.... where is she?!
~J+L4ever
Author's Response: Just keep reading. :-D I know, it can be cruel. |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.05.20 - 07:23PM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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I am sooooo amazed at this chapter!!! You totally got me in the last one when they froze when they opened the door! ;)
Your Sev is soooo very right! I wonder who just talked to him...(I hope that it's not part of the trio or something like that...)
~J+L4ever
Author's Response: Thanks J+L4ever. I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. It's been a lot of fun for me to write. |
EXECUTR |
2006.05.19 - 09:23PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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Now that was NOT a good place to stop. I mean REALLY. We're panting here and you put us on hold? I am waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know, it was cruel of me, but I really couldn't resist. I'm about half done with the next one. Thanks for reviewing. :) |
EXECUTR |
2006.05.19 - 09:23PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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Now that was NOT a good place to stop. I mean REALLY. We're panting here and you put us on hold? I am waiting impatiently for the next chapter! |
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