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| Aiden | 2006.06.26 - 07:57AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Great chapter. Snape is truly hopeless at human relations. Luckily, Aurelia has the patience and insight to wait while he learns. Great OFC. Thanks for the fast update. Author's Response: Thanks, Aiden. I really love Snape in this one. He's so much fun when he's socially awkward. And yes, he is lucky that Aurelia has the patience to see that there is a jewel waiting to be polished beneath his gruff exterior. | |||
| Prefiera de Gryfalco | 2006.06.20 - 06:37PM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| :O EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE! I demand you update immediately! ;-) Good chapter though! Author's Response: Bwahahaha! I love evil cliffies. | |||
| AmandaB | 2006.06.19 - 09:17PM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| Hmm, what is going to happen now? I love Snape's hesitation, and agree that marriage is a large step. But I also understand Aurelia's desire to be a part of Snape's life. I wonder how his mother and her children will take the news, not to mention Remus. I look forward to how this continues. Author's Response: Reactions will be coming soon. :) You will get at least one in Chapter 13 (which is now up). Poor Severus. He just can't have things go how he wants them to. LOL | |||
| Yael Alexis | 2006.06.18 - 09:11PM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| OMG, poor Severus! He is going to die from the shock! LOL
One question, don't you think it's time for Aurelia to meet Eileen as Snape's mother? I do not recall this had happened already.
Anyway, thanks for the update! I love your story.
Author's Response: Yael, I think you will be pleased with what happens in Chapter 13 (which is now up). I don't want to spoil any of the surprise here, but I'm very glad that you are enjoying this story. It's been tons of fun for me to write. | |||
| grumpirah | 2006.06.18 - 10:52AM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| (O,O) I must say I didn't see that one coming, I felt some twist was coming but not that! Author's Response: :D Thanks. I'm glad to see that there are still surprises in store for people. Poor Severus. Just not something he was at all ready for, was it? | |||
| EXECUTR | 2006.06.18 - 10:22AM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| Poor Snape. A bit shocking for him. Please continue. Thanks for writing. Author's Response: Thanks, EXECUTR. Yup, it is quite shocking for him. The next chapter is up and I'm about half way through the one after. I'm gonig to see this one through to the end. | |||
| Aiden | 2006.06.17 - 11:14PM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| Oh my! That's exciting news. Fingers crossed that he doesn't screw this up. Author's Response: Severus screw something up? Where would you get that idea? LOL Keep reading to see how he reacts. :) | |||
| JamesandLily4ever | 2006.06.08 - 06:59PM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| Ooooo.... ShE bEtTeR bE gLaD oF wHaT sHe HaS rIgHt NoW... ;)
~Meli
P/s: Great chapter!(I'm so glad I'm a chapter behind... well, not for long....) Author's Response: Thanks, Meli. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I keep hoping to update on a weekly basis, but RL keeps interfering. :) | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2006.06.06 - 12:28AM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| I agree with you totally about the fan cliche of great sex. How many couples actually have simulltaneous orgasms every single time? It's only that way in porn. I've found it to be rare among the women I 've talked with about sex. I found that for us it's only possible in one position, and I'm no longer limber enough for that position. It must be doubly difficult for couples who have fertility problems and must have intercourse according to a strict schedule. I doubt that when both partners are under that kind of pressure that a true orgasm would be possible for either one. I found your description of normal sex to be very refreshing. Author's Response: Thanks again. I really enjoyed showing that this is not SexGod!Snape who knows exactly how to pleasure his woman and bring her to climax at the proper time. Awkward "OMG I'm really with a woman" Severus was so much more fun. :) And much more realistic, IMO. After all, he hasn't been with woman since sometime before the final battle. *wink* | |||
| AmandaB | 2006.06.05 - 06:14PM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| I liked how you show that both of them want each other so much that the consequences of the sex doesn't occur to them until later. The urgency and the pleasure was very well displayed without being overly explicit, which I really like. I don't think that he took advantage of her, and I liked the line about her needing him. I also liked the line about Snape repressing his emotions for twenty years and him being uncomfortable with affection. It's been a long time for both of them, and I hope this experience will only bring them closer together. I also like how Malfoy is unable to sucessfully taunt Snape, and the line about flaws and all is wonderful. Aurelia is patient, and that's a prerequisite with Snape. Keep writing. Author's Response: Thanks, Amanda. The joy of this story is that I've had enough time to really try to make this as realistic as possible in terms of developing the relationship. Severus is so incredibly complex and she is really starting to peel back some of the layers now...The scene with Malfoy is one of my favorites. I just love Severus sticking it to him. :D I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have finally made a decent dent in the next chapter. LOL Hopefully by this weekend I'll have it submitted. | |||
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