Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble
greenwood |
2006.09.27 - 12:00AM |
3: Meetings and Consequences |
Signed |
Tragic ending that! I hope that Narcissa's death will give some strength to Draco and some wisdom as well. Great story so far. One comment...isn't standing in line referred to "que" in the UK? Keep in comming. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: You are correct - standing in line should be queued up or even queuing in line. I've been living in Canada too long. They do use standing in line as well, though. Thanks for your comments. |
mother |
2006.09.26 - 06:26PM |
3: Meetings and Consequences |
Signed |
Poor Narcissa, all that trouble for nothing.
Author's Response: For nothing... hmm? We'll see what repurcussions will come of the act later. |
LunaSnape |
2006.09.18 - 04:13PM |
2: Bitter lessons |
Signed |
O lala! LOL! I like it! But can you bring Jenny back soon? I liked her. Update soon *LS*
Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll see lots of Jenny - she's got a lot to say. |
Kodiak1 |
2006.09.18 - 01:30PM |
1: Prologue |
Anonymous |
Thanks for sharing this. I like the depth that you give to Snape. The backstory that you've painted is quiet sad. I can't wait to see what comes next. |
Lydia |
2006.09.18 - 11:40AM |
2: Bitter lessons |
Signed |
Very well-written story ... I'm looking forward to more! |
greenwood |
2006.09.17 - 11:59PM |
2: Bitter lessons |
Anonymous |
Well written, well ended. Severus' softening toward Draco seems in such contrast to how he treaded Bella. The contrast was sharp and biting. Very dramatic and gave the chapter great depth. I look forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments. I think you'll find my Severus a man of contrasts - the story is finished and off to the beta. Hopefully, I can post more frequently. |
greenwood |
2006.01.18 - 07:38PM |
1: Prologue |
Anonymous |
Very good start. You have all the characters so very much in cannon here. Bella is very "Bella" in her dialog about Snape. Snape seems focused on the coward thought which would seem right since he was so clear on letting Harry know he was not a coward. It will be very interesting to see how this developes and if you have an explaination of why this is so important to him.
Author's Response: Thank you. We might journey a little into Snape's past and we will see more of where he comes from. |
Ilikesnape |
2006.01.18 - 08:21AM |
1: Prologue |
Signed |
I hope there is a next chapter
I look forward to reading it
Author's Response: It's coming...maybe not fast but it's coming. |
Trickie Woo |
2006.01.18 - 05:16AM |
1: Prologue |
Signed |
I'm glad to see you posted it here too. As I said, I found no mistakes when i read it. Are you going to put "A Part of Me That Is Missing" here also? Marilynn
Author's Response: Thank you for your confidence. It took a few tries to get it posted and I still have to get it looking better. |
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