Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble
beaweasley2 |
2007.04.01 - 11:27AM |
6: Painful Loyalty |
Anonymous |
06-12-2006 00:40 Rated 9
Ooh, this is good. Please, please continue with this story. I am now very much intrigued!
Author's Response: The tale is complete - only being improved upon |
Kate McGuire |
2007.04.01 - 11:26AM |
6: Painful Loyalty |
Anonymous |
03-12-2006 23:16 Rated 10
Very intriging!
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. |
greenwood |
2007.04.01 - 11:24AM |
5: Sorceror's List |
Anonymous |
02-12-2006 05:46 Rated 10
Great chapter. I really liked your scene with Severus and Peter in the kitchen. I also got a good laugh at Severus' observation that she used 10 fingers on the key board! Cute...Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Thank you. The kitchen scene was fun to write. |
Deborah Malfoy |
2007.04.01 - 11:24AM |
5: Sorceror's List |
Anonymous |
22-11-2006 16:23
More please...this is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you - more shortly. |
Floris |
2007.04.01 - 11:22AM |
4: Mourning Choices |
Anonymous |
31-10-2006 21:57 Rated 8
I'm liking this very much. More please!
Author's Response: Coming soon, but only an 8 (author pouts). I really don't care, just enjoy!
HUGS CEARRAE |
pudella |
2007.04.01 - 11:21AM |
3: Meetings and Consequences |
Anonymous |
04-02-2007 04:08 Rated 10
He really put Bella in her place. I can totally imagine Snape in a chess club. I was wondering when Snape would meet up with Voldemort and the other Deatheaters. I was worried when Narcissa and Draco showed up...I shouldn't feel bad for her because she is blood racist and a DE collaborator, but I felt bad what happened to her.
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pudella |
2007.04.01 - 11:19AM |
2: Bitter lessons |
Anonymous |
04-02-2007 03:42 Rated 10
I was not familiar with the terms , "larder", "betters", "priest hole", "switch" and "ticking" (the last two I never saw used this way), but I looked them up so I learned something new. The image I get in my head of Snape with short hair and a beard sounds like hans gruber from die hard. I can't imagine Snape telling anyone they should "marry and have lots of babies". I imagined Snape getting payment from Narcissa, not Bellatrix, but I he can't afford to be choosey.
Author's Response: I try to use Britishisms where they would apply and I'm glad you were able to find them.
Bella, as far as I'm concerned, has little in the way of morals left in her bones and let's face it, Severus is a MAN... Yeah! |
beaweasley2 |
2007.04.01 - 11:17AM |
1: Prologue |
Anonymous |
05-12-2006 22:39 Rated 9
Fairly nice - no, rather good portrail of Snape. It is a good beginning and looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Keep going! |
LunaSnape |
2006.10.04 - 02:50PM |
3: Meetings and Consequences |
Signed |
GASP!!!!!!! I'm speechless! Update as soon as possible! *LS* |
Anouska Draconius |
2006.09.29 - 06:15AM |
3: Meetings and Consequences |
Signed |
I read this story on AFF, I'm so glad you decided to post it here. I shall be reading it again and really enjoying it. |
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