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Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble

beaweasley2 2007.04.01 - 11:27AM 6: Painful Loyalty Anonymous
06-12-2006 00:40 Rated 9

Ooh, this is good. Please, please continue with this story. I am now very much intrigued!

Author's Response: The tale is complete - only being improved upon

Kate McGuire 2007.04.01 - 11:26AM 6: Painful Loyalty Anonymous
03-12-2006 23:16 Rated 10

Very intriging!

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

greenwood 2007.04.01 - 11:24AM 5: Sorceror's List Anonymous
02-12-2006 05:46 Rated 10

Great chapter. I really liked your scene with Severus and Peter in the kitchen. I also got a good laugh at Severus' observation that she used 10 fingers on the key board! Cute...Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you. The kitchen scene was fun to write.

Deborah Malfoy 2007.04.01 - 11:24AM 5: Sorceror's List Anonymous
22-11-2006 16:23

More please...this is wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you - more shortly.

Floris 2007.04.01 - 11:22AM 4: Mourning Choices Anonymous
31-10-2006 21:57 Rated 8

I'm liking this very much. More please!

Author's Response: Coming soon, but only an 8 (author pouts). I really don't care, just enjoy! HUGS CEARRAE

pudella 2007.04.01 - 11:21AM 3: Meetings and Consequences Anonymous
04-02-2007 04:08 Rated 10

He really put Bella in her place. I can totally imagine Snape in a chess club. I was wondering when Snape would meet up with Voldemort and the other Deatheaters. I was worried when Narcissa and Draco showed up...I shouldn't feel bad for her because she is blood racist and a DE collaborator, but I felt bad what happened to her.

pudella 2007.04.01 - 11:19AM 2: Bitter lessons Anonymous
04-02-2007 03:42 Rated 10

I was not familiar with the terms , "larder", "betters", "priest hole", "switch" and "ticking" (the last two I never saw used this way), but I looked them up so I learned something new. The image I get in my head of Snape with short hair and a beard sounds like hans gruber from die hard. I can't imagine Snape telling anyone they should "marry and have lots of babies". I imagined Snape getting payment from Narcissa, not Bellatrix, but I he can't afford to be choosey.

Author's Response: I try to use Britishisms where they would apply and I'm glad you were able to find them.

Bella, as far as I'm concerned, has little in the way of morals left in her bones and let's face it, Severus is a MAN... Yeah!

beaweasley2 2007.04.01 - 11:17AM 1: Prologue Anonymous
05-12-2006 22:39 Rated 9

Fairly nice - no, rather good portrail of Snape. It is a good beginning and looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: Keep going!

LunaSnape 2006.10.04 - 02:50PM 3: Meetings and Consequences Signed
GASP!!!!!!! I'm speechless! Update as soon as possible! *LS*

Anouska Draconius 2006.09.29 - 06:15AM 3: Meetings and Consequences Signed
I read this story on AFF, I'm so glad you decided to post it here. I shall be reading it again and really enjoying it.

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