Reviews for Jehane Desrosiers, Chapter 1
MollysSister |
2007.05.06 - 09:29PM |
11: Chapter 11 -- Wand Work |
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I liked the intimacy of their wands as part of their love making, it was touching. |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 11:57PM |
10: Chapter 10 -- Doubting |
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I'll admit that at first I found J's willingness to sacrafice herself for Severus to be off putting. The idea that she was there to save him/for him felt too much like martyerdom. (yikes no spell check) But now that they have had this break through, the relationship feels more balanced. When S says he has never had a fight that ended with being together, I litteraly felt pain in my chest. That was just wrenching.
Oh I have to g to bed now, its late. Thank you so much for this story!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! I've deliberately made Jehane rather ordinary looking because I got tired of the very beautiful, curvaceous and clever OFCs. I kept "clever" because it's more interesting, |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 11:29PM |
9: Chapter 9 -- Slow |
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Awwwww days and days in bed showing Severus what it is like to be loved. ((sighs happily))
Author's Response: Lemon delivery! |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 11:24PM |
8: Chapter 8 -- Severus |
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This line made me laugh out loud
“May I have three questions tomorrow?”
“I’m sorry, that is a question.”
too funny! I am glad Snape has started to open up to her and tell her about his past. More lemons please? |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 11:10PM |
7: Chapter 7 -- Professor Snape |
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I think this was the longest chapter yet! I am relieved that they have finally acknowledged their feelings for eachother. it was gettingn a bit angsty for me. I wonder if anyone else has noticed the relationship besides Hagrid? hummmm? |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 10:49PM |
6: Chapter 6 -- Hagrid's Hut |
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Every time the title of her book is mentioned, I giggle. My Mom bought be the Baby Wisperer when my daughter was born. I have seen the movie The Horse Wisperer. Funny how the muggle and wizarding worlds collide isnt it? |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 10:30PM |
4: Chapter 4 -- A Wedding and a Marriage |
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Question the names of things are French, but I assumed Jehane was thinking/speaking English? Did I miss something?
thank you THANK YOU for giving me a tall, small busted heroine! I greatly resemble this description. Im 5'9 and quite sick of Hermione being idolized because she is short. Ugh! The petite section of the Department store gives me the creeps!
Very sad that you had to kill off her husband. He sounds just wonderful. Oh wait SNAPE in the future. Its okay then I guess! Snicker!
Author's Response: She's French. She's telling her story in English, so she's translating for us, but she starts out in France and then, as you know, moves to England. |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 10:10PM |
3: Chapter 3 -- Discipleship |
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Okay so I was wrong in thinking you were going to bump off Thaila. Her introduction seemed ominius to me! Seems like J is an old soul. She is hurt by her father's actions and yet has insight into why it took awhile for Thalia and P to form an alliance.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Not many people want to wade through all the non-Snape chapters -- this is not exactly shaped like the classic SS/OFC -- so I appreciate your doing so. |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 10:00PM |
2: Chapter 2 -- A Sandy, Winding Road |
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Ouuuu I really liked that J's Mother was a wand maker. I dont think I have ever read any other fan fic where that occupation is used. Good for you! Why do I have the feeling something terrible is going to happen to Thalia? meep! |
MollysSister |
2007.05.04 - 09:53PM |
1: Chapter One -- My First Hippogriff |
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Hello! I really liked the back story of Hipograf care, naming, breaking etc... I am glad J found something to free her from her depression. To have a parent die while still a teen must be a wretched experience. |
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