Reviews for Mercies
Lady Whitehart |
2006.08.16 - 04:49PM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
Interesting twist; I hope this will be a plotline in Book 7 but I'm not holding my breath.
Author's Response: Probably not. Thanks for reviewing! |
journeymom |
2006.06.13 - 04:56AM |
1: one shot |
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And this should remain a one-shot. It's just perfect the way it is. I like one-shots. Neat, tidy, concentrated story telling.
Author's Response: Thanks for both sets of comments. Glad you enjoyed it. |
journeymom |
2006.06.13 - 04:53AM |
1: one shot |
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Oh, duh! "He cannot kill you if you are already dead." |
whatev |
2006.01.16 - 05:40PM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
Hey, good story. very original and creative.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. |
HulaHula |
2005.12.24 - 03:44AM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Why?!
Author's Response: The outcome is really up to you, but take a very good look at Severus's comments about Moody and Dumbledore. Then read the news bulletin again. |
sinaz0211 |
2005.12.07 - 04:25PM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
I like this concept! It reads like a spy thriller, which, of course, HP is, in one sense. Is your story entered in the Deathday Challenge?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. No, I didn't enter. |
Orangeblossom |
2005.12.02 - 10:21AM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
Great story! This could very well have happened in canon. Will there be more chapters?
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't plan to write more on this one, but we'll see. |
Apothecaria |
2005.12.01 - 09:18PM |
1: one shot |
Signed |
I like the ambiguity of Severus' position here, though this is an awfully dark extrapolation from the end of HBP. All three characters appear to be united by the anguish of regret. Though I think Draco will be around to plague Harry in book 7.
Author's Response: Oh, good, ambiguity was what I was aiming for! Thanks for lettimg me know I did it! Yeah, I think Draco will be in book 7 too. |
greenwood |
2005.12.01 - 08:49PM |
1: one shot |
Anonymous |
Oh wow what a wonderful beginning of a story! Your ending was amazing! So Severus will now take the hit (in the eyes of those who don't know) the full brunt of murder(s). I wonder what he will say to the DL when it comes time! I can't wait till you post the next chaper!
Author's Response: Erm...sorry but I really intended this to be a one shot. I glad you liked it and I'm glad you "got" it. |
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