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Reviews for Trapped

girl_interrupted 2006.02.14 - 10:06AM 3: The Many Faces of Death Signed
That was truely grotesque!!! Brilliantly written im loving this very captivating dark and dreay tell!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! Glad you like my story! Have you read the entire story yet? There's an epilogue yet to come, hope it'll be up soon.

girl_interrupted 2006.02.14 - 09:54AM 2: Behold the Traitor! Signed
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! some one save snape!!!!! and snape what the hell you last thoughts are of no more neville!!!

girl_interrupted 2006.02.14 - 09:43AM 1: Of Sneaks and Snakes Signed
Great start!!!!! and have to agree with snape about umbridge lusting after him.....utterly disgusting and seriously cringe worthy!

severusphoenix 2006.02.13 - 09:50PM 14: Horror and Hope Signed
Have really enjoyed the story - are you sure there isn't more?, or a sequel?

Author's Response: There's still the epilogue to come, I pushed the completed button when I uploaded it, because I thought it would only take a few days, but it seems to take the admins ages. Hope it will be up soon, though. Thank you so much for R&R! Glad you enjoyed my story!

DMG 2006.02.13 - 06:23PM 14: Horror and Hope Signed
Oh, I need more, I really, really NEED more!

Author's Response: There'll be an epilogue soon to come. I already sent it to the admins, hopefully they will validate it soon. But that was it then, sorry. Real life is so busy, I just don't have the time to write anything new. Thanks for R&R!

greenwood 2006.02.10 - 08:10PM 14: Horror and Hope Anonymous
Good resolution to the problem. This was a very good story and I look forward to the epilogue to see what you have planned for Severus going forward.

Author's Response: It'll be up soon (if there aren't too many mistakes that is). Hope you'll like it!

DMG 2006.02.09 - 08:01PM 14: Horror and Hope Signed
(Just the epilogue left now ...) Oh nooooooo - want more - want more!

Author's Response: Sorry, there won't be more, real life is just too busy. But at least I'll finish the story. And there will be plenty of space for your own imagination between the last chapter and the epilogue. I just uploaded the epilogue, hope it'll be up soon (if there aren't too many mistakes). Thanks for R&R!

Sureves 2006.02.09 - 01:33PM 14: Horror and Hope Signed
Another great chapter ! & what a relief, things finally seem to be improving for poor Severus. Epilogue ??!! what do you mean epilogue ??!! it can't be over already ! Noooooo.......

Author's Response: I'm really sorry, but I don't have the time to expand the story, so only the epilogue. What happens between the last chapter and the epilogue I leave to your own imagination. Thank you so much for R&R!

journeymom 2006.02.09 - 12:12PM 14: Horror and Hope Signed
This whole "Crouching" inner monologue is fascinating. You put across the sense that he wants to escape through his disjointed rambling. " there is no one to say me my name" That's awkward. You might say 'no one to say my name' or 'no one to tell me my name'. Or maybe I've never heard it put that way? Is that a common phrase? Either way, yay for Severus! I'm glad he's recovering.

Author's Response: As far as I remember, that phrase comes directly from Toni Morrison's book, maybe it's black American English? Then it would be out of character for Severus. I'll consider changing it. Thanks a lot!!!

HedwigsHaven 2006.02.07 - 11:55PM 13: Consultations and Confrontations Signed
I like this, I am a huge succer for the hurt/comfort fics, keep on I need an update!

Author's Response: I'll try my best! Thanks for R&R!

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