Reviews for Darkness and Light 1: The Potions Master's Apprentice
||2009.10.07 - 02:01AM
|Goodness, how could I miss this? The characterizations are spot on, the dialogues with the Weasley Twins are a delight to read, and your OFC is a clever and believable one. I'm very glad that there is a sequel! |
||2006.02.02 - 01:08PM
|you're off to a magnificent start! it's really enjoyable!|
||2005.12.08 - 03:34AM
|So the darkness did turn to light, but a light with conditions. I'm curious to see how this will all work out.|
||2005.12.08 - 03:16AM
|I hope the old saying is right for her, "Things are always darkest before the dawn".|
Author's Response: Well, as you see... the answer is yes. :)
||2005.12.08 - 02:59AM
|A good start, I will be reading this to the finish and continue to the next story.|
Author's Response: Thanks!
||2005.11.26 - 09:19PM
|OK - so 5th reaading here, i believe - i LOVe this peice. It is well written, well characterized, logical and believable, and allows the reader empathy towards both key characters.
A beautiful and intriguing introduction in the 1st chapter.
Author's Response: Fifth reading? Wow. How very gratifying -- thanks a lot!
||2005.11.26 - 01:34AM
|Read this story elsewhere a while ago and it's still one of my very favorites. Nice to see ithere. |
Author's Response: Thank you!
||2005.11.25 - 08:28PM
|It is not really over, is it? I am hoping that the 1 indicates that this is simply the first part, right? This is excellent and I love the character of Maud. Very intriguing and so many possibilities. Excellent job! (but only if this is not the end- LOL!)|
Author's Response: No fear -- it's not the end! There are two more stories to come. Thanks for your interest!
||2005.11.25 - 05:31PM
|You just can't end it there. I forbid it. Get writing. I want more.|
Author's Response: Don't worry, there's lots to come. :)
||2005.11.25 - 10:48AM
|I have fallen in love with your new character!! Please, continue your story soon! I do adore Fred and George and this one as well. Great writing!!!|
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you like the next chapter as well!
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