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Reviews for Detention at Spinner's End

rab 2006.04.11 - 08:29PM 3: Chapter 3: Seducers of the Senses Signed
*applauds* Whew. Very nice! I just love when Snape gets it good. Thanks for updating! ~Snapeluster

Author's Response: *bows gracefully* Thankyou! It was fun to turn the tables on our dear Professor. :) I'm glad you enjoyed all the escapades.

Apothecaria 2006.04.10 - 09:53PM 3: Chapter 3: Seducers of the Senses Signed
Is your real life more hectic than this? It's a wonder you have any time to write at all :)

Author's Response: With running our own restaurant and another about to open its doors....it's a crazy life at this household. LOL! I hope you enjoyed the fic so far. I've got the last chapter started, so I hope you stop by when that one gets posted.

Moony63 2005.11.26 - 10:11PM 2: Chapter 2: Of Wine and Wenches Signed
Wow, very well wriiten. I could just see and hear Professor Snape behaving in just his way, I will be looking for the next chapter. Very darkly sexy. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much. You make me blush. :) I tried very hard to keep him his snarky self. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter as well. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. It makes my day.

rab 2005.11.26 - 09:58AM 2: Chapter 2: Of Wine and Wenches Signed
Compliments on a very well written piece...LOVE the way he makes her repeat the phrase over and over....NICE!! Will be back when there's more. ~Rebecca

Author's Response: Hey Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. This detention is certainly more fun than watching students scrub caldrons and sort ingredients...don't you think?? ;-) I hope you find chapter three entertaining as well.

Trickie Woo 2005.11.25 - 12:43AM 2: Chapter 2: Of Wine and Wenches Signed
I hate the SS/HG thing, but since it wasn't actually Hermione I enjoyed this. I love OFC stories and that what this is. As an OFC story I found it very enjoyable and very hot and not at all perverted. I find real SS/HG stories to be too much like incest and too perverted to read. I hope the night isn't over yet, Willow deserves some more attention.

Author's Response: I'm not a fan of SS/HG either. I have a few online friends that love that pairing but I have the same feeling as you...it can get a bit too pervie. I will read some SS/HG but this is as close as I can come to writing about this pairing. I do have one more chapter to finish up. Don't worry, Miss Willow will not be ignored. Severis has paid for a whole night of fun. ;-) Thanks so much for reading my fic and commenting. I appreciate it!

Trickie Woo 2005.11.19 - 12:39AM 1: Chapter 1: The Indulgence of Spirits Signed
I like the way you have Severus treating Peter Pettigrew, it's exactly what he deserves. I loved it when he said "I feel like one of Malfoy's house elves." Snape's role playing game with Pettigrew sounds like lots of fun for Snape. Now I'm waiting to find out his preference in sexual fun and games. Update soon.

Author's Response: Let' just say that I'm putting myself in Snape's place when it come to tormenting that despicable Animagus. Mwa! Ha! Ha! Ha! I hope you aren't disappointed in the next chapter...the smut chapter! ;)

Orangeblossom 2005.11.18 - 06:18PM 1: Chapter 1: The Indulgence of Spirits Signed
I like what I've read so far. You've managed to keep both Severus and Peter in character. The kids finding the fox, will that be significant later?

Author's Response: Thanks! I have a couple of close people in my life that I can base my interpretation of Snape. The main one is my Capricorn brother. I'm the Albus to his Severus. LOL! "The kids finding the fox, will that be significant later?" Answer: Lets just say that the Muggle children will make another appearance.

Aragon 2005.11.18 - 04:25PM 1: Chapter 1: The Indulgence of Spirits Signed
Promising beginning imo! I like your Severus - nasty, superior, dominant but thankfully not too angsty and whiny post-AD. I was relieved that his "roleplaying sessions" with Peter were of a sadistic but decidedly non-sexual nature ^_~ I'm looking forward to more. btw: Aren't Severus and Wormtail a bit too carefree when it comes to names and appearances? Will the whores be oblivated or something else that guarantees their silence? With Severus being the probably most sought man in Wizarding Britain at the moment.... and not in a good way ^_^ And what is with the madame? I had the feeling Severus was quite open with his own identity in his request...

Author's Response: I'm hoping that I keep Severus that way throughout. Although, I think as my fic progresses, you may get a glimpse of his soft spot. I always felt he had one, much like the Grinch, but keeps it very well hidden. I like a bitter, superior, dominant Snape. My feeling is that his past experiences, during his formative years, made him that way. The constant teasing (and possible parental abuse) he received as a child, caused him to set up this emotional protective barrier. He is protrayed as "nasty" in the books, but it is a different type of "nasty" as compared to Lucius Malfoy. I have to agree with you that the men seem a bit "carefree" with their identities. However, Madam Morbida runs quite the discreet operation. She wouldn't be in business very long if she wasn't. You may be surprised at who she has "serviced". ;)

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