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| talloaks | 2005.11.27 - 04:50PM | 5: Of Potions and Mirrors | Signed |
| Really this is a very interesting story. I like the method you have selected to move your idea along. Fascinating that the mirror cause a similar injury to Snape.
It was different to have Harry not caring and using the curse, then transform and suddenly realize the truth. He doesn't appear to really regret his use of it no matter what he told Minerva.
I look forward to the continuation of your story. Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon (if the admins don't find any more mistakes and the notification mail doesn't bounce back again that is...). Thank you for reviewing! | |||
| Verity Brown | 2005.11.22 - 12:54PM | 5: Of Potions and Mirrors | Signed |
| Ouch! That wound seems likely to prove eventually fatal. Poor Snape!
BTW, it's a common mistake in fan-fic, but Pepper-Up Potion is a cure for the common cold, not something to pep you up. | |||
| miraba | 2005.11.16 - 01:48AM | 5: Of Potions and Mirrors | Signed |
| You have an excellent ear for dialogue, but I find Harry's willingness to forgive Snape a bit OOC. In my opinion, his reaction would be "Maybe Albus ordered Snape to kill him, but Snape is still a murdering bastard!" | |||
| greenwood | 2005.11.14 - 04:29PM | 5: Of Potions and Mirrors | Anonymous |
| Great chapter! Wow, you added something completely new to the twist! I guess I thought that the final battle had taken place. Now I can see that it has not. Very good. I look forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: We will get to the final battle eventually ... Thanks for reviewing, there will be more soon! | |||
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