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Reviews for From the Journal of Severus Snape

Arachnae 2005.11.15 - 09:37PM 6: 6 - Spinner's End Signed
Such a curious story. I like it. Is there more?

Author's Response: Yes, chapter 7 is awaiting validation, and I'm currently working on chapter 9.

Trickie Woo 2005.11.14 - 05:19PM 6: 6 - Spinner's End Signed
Chapter 5 is dated July 2 and Chapter 6 is dated July 1. Are they chronologically out of order for a reason or did you really mean to date Chapter 5 June 1? Is she his guardian angel or is she a ghost? Did Dumbledore cast a spell on her that sends her to him when he needs her most? How does she know where he is? How does she find him, he never finds her? I've decided that she cannot be a living witch and I don't believe she is a demon. But who is she and what is she. I think she is there to help him go through with what he has to do in less thsn a year's time on the Astronomy Tower, so that means she is connected to Dumbledore in some way.

Author's Response: There is a year's difference between chapters 5 and 6. Chapter 5 chronicles the year that Harry first learns of the Order of the Phoenix, and when Umbridge tries to take over Hogwarts; Chapter 6 begins when Severus goes to Spinner's End, just before JKR's book 6 starts. Dumbledore had hired Olivia, but that is his only connection with her. He might know more than he's telling (Dumbledore always does), but she doesn't know what's to come, any more than Snape does.

Trickie Woo 2005.11.11 - 03:58AM 5: 5 - Unforgivable Signed
I still have doubts as to whether she exists, but I hope she does. What has me so unsure now is the response he got when he asked his colleagues if they knew where she was or where her rooms were. Now I am wondering how she got out from under him and out of the bindings, I don't see how she could have had help so she has to be able to do wandless magic if she is real. I loved Severus pulling a Gypsy Rose Lee style striptease, that was quite a turn on..

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun with Snape writing this chapter!

Trickie Woo 2005.11.07 - 02:00PM 4: 4 - Magical Savior Signed
I like the way this journal entry started so matter of fact with just stating the facts and progressed through his emotions until he reached a state of Nirvana. Which once again makes me wonder who is she? Does she really exist? The way she cured his pain is very like the effect of Demerol, you start out racked with pain and soon you feel like your'e floating on air because you feel so good. But one thing I know for sure, you could never have sex that good when your'e on Demerol...you wouldn't have the prescence of mind to be able to do it. Is it possible that Albus knew of her healing powers and sent her their to heal him after he returned?

Author's Response: The very questions that plague Severus! Anything is possible...

Trickie Woo 2005.11.05 - 10:38PM 3: 3 - Intensity Signed
I was pleased to see Snape was finally able to take control, but how did she get into his rooms? Snape playing with himself was quite erotic. The question of how she got into his rooms still leaves me wondering if she is real or not. Is it possible she is a veela and came with Beaux Batons? Whatever it is it has me puzzled and looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks! Their relationship is really shaping up to be quite complex. And, most of the time, Severus doesn't really care if she's real or not; his mind and body are busy with other things. This story began being a pointless, porn without plot thing, but, as usual, once I started, it began writing itself. Even I'm not sure where it will end up. It depends largely on Snape the Muse and his eccentricities.

Trickie Woo 2005.11.05 - 12:51AM 2: 2 - In the Bookroom Signed
"Instinct told me that if she was happy, I would be ecstatic", what a wonderful line. The confrontation between Snape and Moody over Draco was truly funny, especilly when he was trying to hold back his laughter over Moody transforming Draco into a ferret. Does she exist at all, or is she a figment of his melodramtic imagination? And if she does exist why does she only do blow jobs? Doesn't she ever want sexual satisfaction for herself. Doesn't she want to get laid? I'm sure he would be willing to oblige her in return for the pleasure she's given him.

Author's Response: Does she exist at all, or is she a figment of his melodramtic imagination? That is the question... As far as her own sexual satisfaction goes, sometimes it's the thrill of the hunt and entrapment that's so satisfying. Stay tuned...

Anouska Draconius 2005.11.04 - 10:41AM 1: I've Always Been A Quidditch Fan Signed
Ohhhh, great start. Hope you write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Anouska Draconius 2005.11.04 - 10:39AM 1: I've Always Been A Quidditch Fan Signed
Ohhhh, great start. Hope you write more soon!

Author's Response: Oh, yes...I'm currently working on chapter 7! Thanks!

Black Spot 2005.11.02 - 03:45PM 1: I've Always Been A Quidditch Fan Signed
Ooh! You are so-oo naughty, writing this. Poor Snape, so frustrated. Hope he gets his leg over soon.

Author's Response: Yes, Snape needs some naughtiness in his life...

Trickie Woo 2005.11.02 - 02:09PM 1: I've Always Been A Quidditch Fan Signed
I love the line that says he is "grateful that only one hand is needed to write. That one really cracked me up.My second favorite line is 'I wouldn't have been able to tell you who was playing that day, besides Olivia". Poor Snape, he's always checking or adjusting his robes trying to hide what's under them. Well, at least he had fun that day. I know I am going to enjoy this story, I've liked every one youhave posted on Occlumency.

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

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