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| DelphiPsmith | 2012.05.20 - 04:31PM | 2: Light in the distance | Signed |
| I've always loved that song, and I really like how you wove it into the story. Looking at the date on this, it was written before the last book came out, right? Your explanation of why Snape became a spy for Dumbledore is an excellent one, logical and believable: he wanted/needed to feel valued, like he was doing something good and worthwhile (don't we all?). Nice job! | |||
| Verity Brown | 2005.11.09 - 01:54AM | 2: Light in the distance | Signed |
| Poor Severus! Too bad they don't have Prozac. ;~) Author's Response: ehm, sorry, what is Prozac??? Sounds like some medicine ... | |||
| greenwood | 2005.11.07 - 08:36PM | 2: Light in the distance | Signed |
| Well done! Well done! I really enjoyed this short story. It was well packed with emotion. You had good imagery going through the entire work and crafted a good plot! Author's Response: Many thanks to you for your reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed my story! | |||
| Amorette | 2005.11.06 - 11:52PM | 2: Light in the distance | Signed |
| You know, take out all the song lyrics and the story would be better for it because it would be all yours. It is a good story, providing us with a likely explanation of Snape's behavior. Taking someone else's poetry out would only make it stronger.
Amorette Author's Response: I'm sorry about the song lyrics, but they inspired me to this fic, that's why I like them to be part of the story. But the second chapter is without song, should be up by now ... | |||
| June W | 2005.11.06 - 10:47PM | 2: Light in the distance | Anonymous |
| Wow.... that's a really cool vision of why Dumbledore trusted Severus. The one ominous note that gives me the shakes is Dumbledore's And I’ll swear a wizard’s oath that you won’t have to go to Azkaban when all this is over. I’ll vouch for you. 'Cuz Dumbledore can't vouch for Severus after Dumbledore is dead. Scary! Thanks for posting this great fic. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked the story so much! | |||
| elfhome | 2005.11.03 - 12:01PM | 1: Going down | Signed |
| I was blown away. It's an interesting concept, a different way of showing his inner pain that I've ever seen before. Well done. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your praise, I'm glad you liked my story! | |||
| greenwood | 2005.11.01 - 04:48PM | 1: Going down | Signed |
| Oh wow! How heart gripping! I really liked your version of events that lead to this event (and even his hair!) Well done! I can't wait to see what happens next. | |||
| Black Spot | 2005.10.31 - 02:29PM | 1: Going down | Signed |
| Sorry, I didn't read it wasn't complete. I wait with bated breath. | |||
| Black Spot | 2005.10.31 - 01:11PM | 1: Going down | Signed |
| Nice, very evocative, but I would have liked to seen his half dead body pulled out. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! As for the half dead body, I like to leave some things to the readers' imagination. And if you like half dead bodies, I just sent the first chapter of another story to the admins called 'Trapped' that might be to your liking ... | |||
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