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Reviews for The Last Boat

DelphiPsmith 2012.05.20 - 04:31PM 2: Light in the distance Signed
I've always loved that song, and I really like how you wove it into the story. Looking at the date on this, it was written before the last book came out, right? Your explanation of why Snape became a spy for Dumbledore is an excellent one, logical and believable: he wanted/needed to feel valued, like he was doing something good and worthwhile (don't we all?). Nice job!

Verity Brown 2005.11.09 - 01:54AM 2: Light in the distance Signed
Poor Severus! Too bad they don't have Prozac. ;~)

Author's Response: ehm, sorry, what is Prozac??? Sounds like some medicine ...

greenwood 2005.11.07 - 08:36PM 2: Light in the distance Signed
Well done! Well done! I really enjoyed this short story. It was well packed with emotion. You had good imagery going through the entire work and crafted a good plot!

Author's Response: Many thanks to you for your reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!

Amorette 2005.11.06 - 11:52PM 2: Light in the distance Signed
You know, take out all the song lyrics and the story would be better for it because it would be all yours. It is a good story, providing us with a likely explanation of Snape's behavior. Taking someone else's poetry out would only make it stronger. Amorette

Author's Response: I'm sorry about the song lyrics, but they inspired me to this fic, that's why I like them to be part of the story. But the second chapter is without song, should be up by now ...

June W 2005.11.06 - 10:47PM 2: Light in the distance Anonymous
Wow.... that's a really cool vision of why Dumbledore trusted Severus. The one ominous note that gives me the shakes is Dumbledore's And Iíll swear a wizardís oath that you wonít have to go to Azkaban when all this is over. Iíll vouch for you. 'Cuz Dumbledore can't vouch for Severus after Dumbledore is dead. Scary! Thanks for posting this great fic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked the story so much!

elfhome 2005.11.03 - 12:01PM 1: Going down Signed
I was blown away. It's an interesting concept, a different way of showing his inner pain that I've ever seen before. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your praise, I'm glad you liked my story!

greenwood 2005.11.01 - 04:48PM 1: Going down Signed
Oh wow! How heart gripping! I really liked your version of events that lead to this event (and even his hair!) Well done! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Black Spot 2005.10.31 - 02:29PM 1: Going down Signed
Sorry, I didn't read it wasn't complete. I wait with bated breath.

Black Spot 2005.10.31 - 01:11PM 1: Going down Signed
Nice, very evocative, but I would have liked to seen his half dead body pulled out.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! As for the half dead body, I like to leave some things to the readers' imagination. And if you like half dead bodies, I just sent the first chapter of another story to the admins called 'Trapped' that might be to your liking ...

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