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Reviews for Amoris Infinitas

greenwood 2005.12.02 - 08:31PM 7: Of Potion Books and Parchments Anonymous
Well I think you have really done it this time! What an original concept! Knowing that JKR has said that power of Love is the under current of her books your plot angle is well placed! I like the idea that to split your love - you strengthen it rather than diminish it. It is a wonder that someone has to die for it to happen, however. I Harry reading something incorrectly? I guess we will all have to wait to see if Harmione corrects his translation or they face an odd problem to this solution. Great job!

Author's Response: I fear Harry did read it correctly, someone has to die. But who? You will find out, I think in chapter 12 or so. Thank you so much for your review!

ZahariaCelestina 2005.12.02 - 02:20PM 7: Of Potion Books and Parchments Signed
Hello there! A very original tale! The title had been intriguing me for a while and I thought I would finally jump in and read. I don't regret it! I love the way you have tied all the loose ends together from HBP; I have reached the same conclusions. Except for the Lily-Severus part of it, which I will not believe until I actually read something about it in book seven that makes me wrong. Somehow, I believe JKR can be more original than this. I like the way you keep the characters very canon; the choice of a raven was very well done, too! The pace is a tad fast, as we merely skim a few important events (the death of many of their friends, for example, how come the school is deserted, and so on) but I guess you just wanted to get to the point, to the essential, so I do not think it makes the story lose any of its value. Well done, and I look forward to reading your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I'm glad you like my story! The pace is quite fast, but that's mostly because I have very little time to write. So I concentrate on the essential things. I already uploaded the next chapter, hope it will be up soon.

MithLuin 2005.12.02 - 01:42PM 7: Of Potion Books and Parchments Anonymous
Hmmm, wonder who it's going to be this time? Somehow, Snape strikes me as a decent candidate for sacrificial death ;)

Author's Response: You will find out before the end ... Thank you for r&r!

Journeymom 2005.11.30 - 02:28AM 6: Apologies and Drops of Blood Anonymous
Whoa! That's...intriguing. I can't see Harry forgiving Snape so quickly. But this is otherwise convincing.

Verity Brown 2005.11.30 - 12:13AM 6: Apologies and Drops of Blood Signed
How odd...I thought I read this chapter before. I like the interesting directions this is going. :~)

Author's Response: I was dead sure I had posted it already, too. But somehow it had disappeared, as the first chapter of my other story 'Trapped'. Hope this won't happen again. Thank you for r&r!

Black Spot 2005.11.29 - 04:37PM 6: Apologies and Drops of Blood Signed
Wow! I read chapter 1 a while back and wondered where it would go... Well I'm flabbergastered. It's brilliant. More please -soon.

Author's Response: Thank you, blush. I'll do my best to update frequently.

talloaks 2005.11.27 - 04:50PM 5: Of Potions and Mirrors Signed
Really this is a very interesting story. I like the method you have selected to move your idea along. Fascinating that the mirror cause a similar injury to Snape. It was different to have Harry not caring and using the curse, then transform and suddenly realize the truth. He doesn't appear to really regret his use of it no matter what he told Minerva. I look forward to the continuation of your story.

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon (if the admins don't find any more mistakes and the notification mail doesn't bounce back again that is...). Thank you for reviewing!

Verity Brown 2005.11.22 - 12:59PM 1: Signed
OOOOOOoooooooooooo! Wonderful! Clever! I can't wait to see what happens now! :~)

Verity Brown 2005.11.22 - 12:54PM 5: Of Potions and Mirrors Signed
Ouch! That wound seems likely to prove eventually fatal. Poor Snape!

BTW, it's a common mistake in fan-fic, but Pepper-Up Potion is a cure for the common cold, not something to pep you up.

Verity Brown 2005.11.22 - 12:48PM 4: The Last Memory Signed
It makes sense that Dumbledore would leave memories that would sort things out. But I hope that Snape's faithfulness doesn't really turn out to be a result of an Unbreakable Vow.

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