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Midnightshadows 2005.10.22 - 12:17AM 23: Chapter 23: Consummation Signed
*Smack* Oh sorry. I lost myself in the engagement for a second there....*Smack* What they're married now.....*Smack* ouch *Rubs Head* Got to stop doing that but, they had sex.....*Giggles like a school girl* Anyway. Now that my head is throughly throbbing, like something else in this story ~^, i can get to giving you a review. Loved the beginning, Loved the middle and guess what, Loved the end. Very considerate on the love making part, that is when the barrier is broken. Although I must say that I don't think my first time went as well as that. She got lucky. Then again she had Severus. Severus is rather selfish don't you think? He wants to transfigure her modest night wear into something skimpy but he will not allow her to do the same. Tut tut shame on him. I think it is beautiful that they can experiance this kind of bond even after all they had been through. Although I must say now that Severus has let himself go completely with Rowena....What will happen next time he goes up against the Dark Lord? He must have VERY good Occlumency to keep thoughts and images of their extra activities out of his head. Looking forward to the next one. Also couldn't help but notice that this title is the same as the very first chapter. Just thought I'ld say.

Author's Response: EEP! Thanks for pointing that out! I fixed it! And yes, I do think Severus is very selfish--heh--we will continue to see that throughout the story. The Bond did help him out, though, in that it enabled him to be more aware of what was 'working'. ;)

Trickie Woo 2005.10.21 - 01:15AM 23: Chapter 23: Consummation Signed
I always loved this chapter because everybody gets what they were waiting so long for, Rowena, Severus, and me. This chapter is so much better now than when it was on AFN, it's all smoothed out and flows well now. As I said before about his kissing, Severus must be a quick study, particularly since he's a virgin himself. But then in fan fiction he is a sex god, and sex gods already know everything about it and how to do it expertly, it's instinctive with them. You write beautifully romantic sex scenes that are about love without being overly graphic.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It is odd how intensely 'personal' it feels to write and 'post' a 'smut' scene, so I am always especially anxious to hear from my readers as to what they thought of it. I agree with you on how Severus is often portrayed unrealistically skilled in the sexual department, especially in this scenario where he is so inexperienced. I think the advantage of the Bond, and that he is proceeding so very slowly, help him out. :)

snapehp 2005.10.20 - 11:53PM 23: Chapter 23: Consummation Anonymous
Great job! You wrote it well! I really enjoyed how they could feel each other's emotions because of the bond. I can't wait to see how that will play out in the later chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Posting those lemons always makes me feel a bit nervous as to how they will be received. It's such a personal thing. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

LunaSnape 2005.10.20 - 03:45PM 23: Chapter 23: Consummation Anonymous
Aaa, another great chapter! It's so beatiful, i love it! Keep writing plz!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I proimse you the story is complete--this will not be abandoned. The next chapter is already in the queue, but the admins are very, very busy right now. It will come, I promise.

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