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| LariLee | 2004.12.29 - 07:36PM | 1: One | Signed |
| The fact that he had charmed his wards to allow him the satisfaction of slamming the door to his private quarters didn’t bring his usual smirk. What a wonderfully Snapish action. So the hair shirt is actually made of the hair of a witch? Interesting concept and interesting place to start your fic. ~Lisa | |||
| Joanna Scarlett | 2004.12.29 - 11:45AM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
| I really love this story although I must admit that it was only because none of the other stories that I was following had been updated that I started reading this one. The summary does not do this story justice.
This is a truly interesting, insightful, well thought out, excellent story that should be getting many more readers and reviews than it it getting. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop and now I can't wait until the next chapter. The only thing that I would suggest needs a little work is just the summary to attract more readers and I'm not even sure how to fix that. You have a really great story here. Keep it coming. Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Your words mean a lot to me. You are not the first reader to comment that the summary did nothing to entice them into the fic. Any suggestions??? | |||
| greenwood | 2004.12.24 - 12:26AM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
| I love your work with images. You have done a splended job with this story so far. I loved the way you ended this chapter. We all know Severus saw her lift back her hood. We "all saw that" but evidently, it was only for him....wonderful! Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like the imagery. I love writing metaphorically! Kind of a conundrum there, eh? Thank you for reading. | |||
| droxy | 2004.12.23 - 11:43PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
| you need to advertise you have updated on WIKTT misc. :> Author's Response: Heh. You. Hmm...when it's all finished, I promise I will "advertise." | |||
| Silverthreads | 2004.12.23 - 09:38PM | 11: Eleven | Signed |
| Ooh, intriguing finish to this chapter. Gosh, I hope you update soon. This is one of the most fascinating tales I've come across. Your writing is superbly engaging. Author's Response: *humbled* Thank you for your encouraging words and thank you for reading! More updates soon! | |||
| greenwood | 2004.12.19 - 01:28PM | 1: One | Signed |
| WOW, WOW, WOW!! That final, small paragraph, WOW...what an image! What signifance! What drama! I didn't see it coming! You have done an excellent job with this fist chapter. It is full of emotion and imagery that just leads you on. The only disconnect that got me was the twins...somehow they seem out of place yet I am sure you have some plan for them later. I can't wait to see | |||
| feastorfamine | 2004.12.18 - 05:53PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Wow, this was on my favorites list at fanfiction.net for a long time, but you never seemed to update. I'm guessing you aren't done uploading all the chapters here that appeared at ff.net, because I remember there being more to the story. In any case, I hope you've decided to write more, not just move it to a new home!! I loved this story when I first read it (being somewhat familiar with Iceland, sagas, and all that helped draw me in), and I hope to read more. Your writing evokes something timeless and universal, it's just beautiful. | |||
| Silverthreads | 2004.12.18 - 02:32PM | 9: Nine | Signed |
| Oh, update soon. Your writing is mesmerizing. | |||
| Silverthreads | 2004.12.18 - 02:09PM | 3: Three | Signed |
| Very beautifully rendered. | |||
| Crooked Cat | 2004.01.28 - 11:42AM | 6: Six | Anonymous |
| "So often he felt as though insights like these washed up onto the shore of his consciousness, bereft of life, but shocking in the clarity of their beauty and utilitarian structure. He collected these shells with the shaking hand of a victorious beachcomber, holding them up in turn to his ear, listening, listening, listening." This is a very powerful image, and one that drew me. The struggle he's endured with himself for years is very well illustrated in this story. I am not usually so fond of introspective points of view but this one has been captivating, to say the least. The sense of impending... something... is so strong; it's hard for -me- to breathe while reading. I can't imagine the strain Severus is under. | |||
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