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shameful_desire 2006.02.17 - 11:36PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I know I'm only done with reading the first chapter, but I must say that your story is very intriguing! I was totally hooked from the first paragraph. It's cool to know that she is French..I love anything to do with france. Several paragraphs through thje first chapter I thought that perhaps you would use "pudlard" as in the french edition of Harry Potter it is used to mean : Hogwarts and "Rougue" is used for Snape-can you believe that? My friends and I spent ages laughing at that. Anyway its off to read the following chapters for me...hope it gets interesting. ps You're the 4th on my favourites list! ; )

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I am not French myself, so I had not read the French version, but the word 'pudlard' is too funny. I can't imagine Snape as anything but Snape. Rougue just doesn't have the same ring! :) Thank you so much for adding me to your favorites list. That is the nicest thing that anyone has ever said. I really really appreciate the people who read and review. It lets me know what you guys like and what you could do without. I am glad that you are enjoying the story! :)

clare 2006.02.02 - 01:58PM 1: Chapter 1 Anonymous
your story was really gripping. It's a shame we aren't all polyglots and you could have written the teacher's dialogue in french.. the effect would have been brilliant.. it would have brought the story to life. Unfortunately some of the verbs you use in relation to Snape lack some credibility (stutter and mumble) and also i can't picture Snape sitting on a school desk.... but that could be a problem with my imagination, rather than your writing!! Great stuff. thanks for the five mins of break from work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I truly wish that I could speak French, it would have been a nice touch, although I probably would have had to then translate it, but it would have made the story better in my opinion as well. :) As for my verbs and such, I am trying to keep him in character as much as possible. This was my first attempt at fanfic and I definitely can see that when I reread over portions of this story, so it's not just you- lol! The next chapter should be up in a few days. Again, thank you for reading and revieiwing. It lets me know what I need to work on as an author.

uchethegirl 2006.01.10 - 05:04PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
You know, I haven't been down at this site for a while, and I was just trolling the "recently added" section in search of diversion. This story already has me grinning and sort of hooked. I'm a sucker for good writing and French, and your story very attractively offers those, as well as the promise of a good plot. ;) I'm definitely interested in finding out, so...reading on...

Author's Response: Thank you for your really nice review. Chapter 9 should be up fairly soon. My beta is looking it over and as soon as she sends it back, I can submit it. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading!

jamesandlily4ever 2005.12.22 - 08:11PM 1: Chapter 1 Anonymous
Great chapter... Serena is great!!!(I'm starting to like her...she made Snape look like a fool...I'd love to see that!!!---priceless!)

Author's Response: I really liek Serena as a character as well. She is fun to write. Her plan was not to make Snape look like a fool, it simply happened. :) Thanks for reading!

Trickie Woo 2005.11.08 - 01:29AM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Boy, right away she knew how to push his buttons and make him angry. She should be careful and watch her back, he will retaliate in kind. This looks to be the start of an interesting story, I enjoyed their confrontation and look forward to more as the sexual tension builds up.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Serena is definitely someone who knows how to push buttons and she enjoys the reactions that follow. The build up of sexual tension/attraction is certainly my favorite part of a romance, and I don't want to rush that. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thank you!

greenwood 2005.10.11 - 04:52PM 1: Chapter 1 Anonymous
Intriguing beginnning. It is obvious that you chosen to write your story in a pre-HBP mode. I will be interested to see how this story evolves. I like the Serena character. She seems more than a match for our dear Professor.

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess I should have mentioned that this pre-HBP. Serena is quite the little character and I really enjoy writing her. Glad you liked the first chapter!




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