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| Black Spot | 2006.02.12 - 02:54PM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| I'm still hanging in there, looking forward to the next chapters. Author's Response: I just got chapter 11 back from my beta, so I need to correct a few things and then submit it. It should be a few days at the most. I am so glad that you are enjoying it! | |||
| MelanieHill | 2006.02.08 - 12:00AM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| This story is wonderful. I read it from start to finish. I did not want it to end. Please continue! The way that they are slowly starting to become more to each other than just co-workers is wonderful! I wonder who the "little friend" that Lupin is returning with really is. I look foward to the next chapters. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review! The story is complete, it is just going through the process of being edited by my beta and then approved by the site administrators. I like a slow build up of romance, so that is what my writing tends to show. The "friend" will be revealed in the next chapter. It is one of my favorite chapters, so I can't wait for you guys to read it, to let me know what you think. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! | |||
| clare | 2006.02.02 - 01:58PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Anonymous |
| your story was really gripping. It's a shame we aren't all polyglots and you could have written the teacher's dialogue in french.. the effect would have been brilliant.. it would have brought the story to life. Unfortunately some of the verbs you use in relation to Snape lack some credibility (stutter and mumble) and also i can't picture Snape sitting on a school desk.... but that could be a problem with my imagination, rather than your writing!!
Great stuff. thanks for the five mins of break from work! Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I truly wish that I could speak French, it would have been a nice touch, although I probably would have had to then translate it, but it would have made the story better in my opinion as well. :) As for my verbs and such, I am trying to keep him in character as much as possible. This was my first attempt at fanfic and I definitely can see that when I reread over portions of this story, so it's not just you- lol! The next chapter should be up in a few days. Again, thank you for reading and revieiwing. It lets me know what I need to work on as an author. | |||
| Miriam | 2006.01.23 - 11:41PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Anonymous |
| Wow, this was fun. I hope you plan on finishing the story. I'll go nuts if I don't read the rest. This is only the second bit of fan fiction I've read so it's hard for me to know how to rate it! But it's definitely quite good.
Miriam Author's Response: Miriam- The story is finished, it is just going through the process of being edited by my beta, read by the administrators of the site, and then finally being posted. It takes a while, but it is worth it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate any feedback from the readers as to what they like, what they didn't, and so forth. Thanks again! :) | |||
| kender | 2006.01.16 - 07:08PM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
| This interesting. I like Serena's character, especially the way whe can infuriate Severus. I hope you update soon. Author's Response: I love Serena as well. She certainly knows what buttons to push in Severus. I just submitted the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing. It is definitely appreciated! | |||
| uchethegirl | 2006.01.10 - 05:04PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| You know, I haven't been down at this site for a while, and I was just trolling the "recently added" section in search of diversion. This story already has me grinning and sort of hooked. I'm a sucker for good writing and French, and your story very attractively offers those, as well as the promise of a good plot.
;) I'm definitely interested in finding out, so...reading on... Author's Response: Thank you for your really nice review. Chapter 9 should be up fairly soon. My beta is looking it over and as soon as she sends it back, I can submit it. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading! | |||
| jamesandlily4ever | 2005.12.22 - 09:39PM | 7: Chapter 7 | Anonymous |
| When are you updating again....I see 7chapters....I need to see what happens after chapter 7.....please oh please oh please!
Anyhow: another great chapter! I like the way you're making Snape fall for Serena! It is sooooo....classy! :) Can't wait for the lessons to start and I still can't find the popcorn... ;)------That was for chapter 6. Now chapter 7...
Another 'well, done!' for you!!! Absolutely love this chapter!(why was Flitwick talking that way???) CAN not wait for update!!! I am so intriged with this fic... Author's Response: I sort of took liberties with the Flitwick character. In my fic, he was a protector for a family that was being threatened by werewolves. They were murdered and it sadly stuck with him. Really, I just needed him to enhance the plot and move it along. :) So I shamelessly used him. Hope you don't mind! Thanks for reading! | |||
| jamesandlily4ever | 2005.12.22 - 09:18PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Anonymous |
| When are you updating again....I see 7chapters....I need to see what happens after chapter 7.....please oh please oh please!
Anyhow: another great chapter! I like the way you're making Snape fall for Serena! It is sooooo....classy! :) Can't wait for the lessons to start and I still can't find the popcorn... ;) Author's Response: I am so sorry about the delay. The holidays threw me off my schedule and I was unable to edit the chapters as I wanted. Thank you for reading and I will do a better job of updating! :) | |||
| jamesandlily4ever | 2005.12.22 - 09:07PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Anonymous |
| *laughs until falling on her seat*
Irony, irony, irony. Wonderful chapter! Stunning really.*grins from ear to ear*
I'm so getting tired of looking for popcorn.... ;) Author's Response: I love the fact that they have to work together to complete the potion (something they both need to learn how to do) and Dumbledore didn't have anything to do with that did he? LOL I love the meddling old coot. I wish you could find some popcorn! :) | |||
| jamesandlily4ever | 2005.12.22 - 08:56PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Anonymous |
| ???I'm confused at the last part....what are you trying to say???
Other wise, lovely chapter...I'm on to the next...I still don't have my Popcorn!!! ;) Author's Response: That last part was very vague, but I wanted it that way. I was implying that Serena was a Legilimens, but didn't come out and say that. Hope it makes sense. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. | |||
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