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MelanieHill 2006.03.14 - 09:33PM 13: Chapter 13 Signed
Ooohhhh what a place to leave us hanging! The meeting went better than I thought it would, Serena handled it better than I would have. Poor Severus being stuck in a love triangle that was not of his making. I look forward to seeing how Serena responds.

Author's Response: Sorry for not responding sooner, but thank you so much for the nice review. The meeting went fairly well, because she is in shock. There will be more in the next chapter. Yes, poor Severus, but all is not lost! :) There are still two chapters to go.

MelanieHill 2006.03.10 - 11:37PM 12: Chapter 12 Signed
This chapter was great. I look forward to Serena's meeting with Thomas.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The meeting between the two is intense. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. :)

krohm06 2006.03.10 - 07:58PM 9: Chapter 9 Signed
I really like your story and I think you did an exceptional job at capturing Snape's mood and his behavior around Serena. I hope Snape and Serena will have more physically contact in future chapters. (l loved the scene with Serena saying good-night to Snape when he pretends he is asleep.) I really hope you continue with your story because it is awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! There will be some physical contact between the two in the next chapter. That was one of my favorite scenes as well. :) The story is complete, I am just waiting for the process of my beta reading it and then submitting it to the mods here at Occlumency. I am glad that you are enjoying it!

naughtygirl3000 2006.03.09 - 03:57PM 12: Chapter 12 Signed
Brilliant!! can't wait till the next chapter!!

Author's Response: I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Chapter 13 should be up very soon. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to respond! :)

cadwynblack 2006.03.02 - 02:38PM 11: Chapter 11 Signed
I am really looking forward to the next one. Keep up the great work!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just submitted chapter 12, so it should be up soon. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story.

M. Black 2006.02.23 - 11:09AM 11: Chapter 11 Anonymous
really looking forward to the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 12 should be coming soon.

Black Spot 2006.02.21 - 03:37PM 11: Chapter 11 Signed
Finally caught up again. Enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) It makes it all worth it when people are enjoying the story.

shameful_desire 2006.02.18 - 01:24AM 11: Chapter 11 Signed
omgdomgdomgdomgdomgdOMGD! I cannot believe I failed to spot the obvious as inTom..Thomas...?!! Oh dear. I hope an answer to what, why and how will be revealed i n the future chapters. I feel trully sorry for Serena..I can't believe how this must feel to her. At first, I thought I also sensed Severus' jealousy. Will thre be a chapete that will give an overview to Serena and Thomas' past or will there only be certain flashbacks throughout the fic? Also, is Thomas French because Serena's surname is "Daniels"? Thankyou for the good read.

Author's Response: It will definitely be answered in the upcoming chapters. It will not be easy for Serena when everyone let her believe that Thomas was dead. There will be a chapter that has a flashback, but also a lot will come out in a conversation between the two. Severus is a little jealous. He knows how much she loved Thomas, and may be worried that she would choose him. Thomas is French, his last name is 'Caron'. The Headmaster at Andrea's is his father. Thank you so much for the kind words. I originally started this just for me, and then on a lark posted it. It is still surprising to me how much people are enjoying it. Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Chapter 12 is in the trusted hands of my beta, so I am hoping that in the next few days the next chapter should be up. :)

shameful_desire 2006.02.17 - 11:36PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I know I'm only done with reading the first chapter, but I must say that your story is very intriguing! I was totally hooked from the first paragraph. It's cool to know that she is French..I love anything to do with france. Several paragraphs through thje first chapter I thought that perhaps you would use "pudlard" as in the french edition of Harry Potter it is used to mean : Hogwarts and "Rougue" is used for Snape-can you believe that? My friends and I spent ages laughing at that. Anyway its off to read the following chapters for me...hope it gets interesting. ps You're the 4th on my favourites list! ; )

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I am not French myself, so I had not read the French version, but the word 'pudlard' is too funny. I can't imagine Snape as anything but Snape. Rougue just doesn't have the same ring! :) Thank you so much for adding me to your favorites list. That is the nicest thing that anyone has ever said. I really really appreciate the people who read and review. It lets me know what you guys like and what you could do without. I am glad that you are enjoying the story! :)

MelanieHill 2006.02.17 - 11:18PM 11: Chapter 11 Signed
Yeah another chapter! This continues to be wonderful and I look forward to the following chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 12 should be up in a few days depending on when I get it back from Sheri, my beta. I am glad that you are enjoying it!

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