Reviews for Moonlit Memories
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 03:29PM |
13: Chapter 13 |
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Say no Serena... say no....
Dude, this is scaring me! He wants her to be away? I like Sev with her better, she needs him more and he needs her more... and I run out of things to say! It's a Sev/oc anyway! I like sev/oc! I love that... I like this story! I hope nothing bad happens!
~Meli
Author's Response: Of course she wouldn't choose Thomas- at least I hope not! :) Serena has more sense than that. It is a Severus/OC. That is what I started writing and now I am branching out into other pairings. :) |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 03:16PM |
12: Chapter 12 |
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Nice! And funny when McGonagall and Dumbledore said "Someone I know has an interest in poetry". ;) Nice work...
now what will happen to Sev and Serena...
~Meli
Author's Response: I think that is my favorite chapter. Even if no one else liked that part I still would have kept it in! I love reading all your comments! |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 03:03PM |
11: Chapter 11 |
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I knew it! *gives a triumphant look*
I knew that it was him!!!! Why did he have to turn up??? I thought (well, from all the clues that he was still alive) he was dead!
But that's a good kind of outer-conflict...
~Meli
Author's Response: Yes, all the clues did point to his death, but I had to create some conflict- lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 02:44PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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How cute! (they both wished each other a Happy Christmas. :) I like the way you write Severus and how hard it is to be so kind to another person.)
Now the question is: what about her 'boyfriend'?
~Meli
Author's Response: Thank you! That is a very nice compliment. Don't worry! All your questions will be answered soon enough! :) |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 02:41PM |
9: Chapter 9 |
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Is the presence Remus? It makes sence, because Remus is a werewolf and she thinks that that species is very interesting... (as do I. ;) )
I'm going to read ahead to find out...
~Meli
Author's Response: By now I think you know who the presence is. :) Thank you so much for being a faithful reviewer! |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.22 - 02:40PM |
8: Chapter 8 |
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I don't remember him being Serena's keeper, but your story is going the right way. ;) I like Serena's character, but I don't understand the thing about her boyfriend...
I like this story anyway. :)
~Meli
Author's Response: He's not really Serena's keeper, Dumbledore just keeps pushing Severus and Serena together so he feels responsible. The boyfriend will make more sense in the later chapters. I am glad that you are enjoying it! |
Lunasnape |
2006.08.21 - 09:30AM |
15: Epilogue |
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Awwwwwwwwww. That was so cute! I loved this story! Plz contact me if you ever write anymore SS/OC fics again plz. Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol. *LS*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kick in the pants! :) I really should have posted the epilogue sooner. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I will certainly let you know if I write any more SS/OC. :) Thank you for everything! |
vailaaa |
2006.06.19 - 03:19PM |
14: Chapter 14 |
Anonymous |
Hi, I have just read the story. It is just wonderful - I like the developement of the plot. Chapter 14 filled with emotions! But there hasen't been a new chapter for a long time as it seems and I wonder when are you going to post anew chapter, Olivialynlee?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I apologize for the long wait. I hate that when authors so that and then I do the same. I am really sorry! I will upload the last chapter this week. It is just a nice little epilogue to tie up my loose ends. Thanks for reading and I again profusely apologize for my delay!! :) |
LunaSnape |
2006.04.25 - 02:30PM |
14: Chapter 14 |
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Ahhh, that was so wonderful *tear*. I would realy like for you to update soon so I can stop imagining what Thomas is going to do... It's pretty bad in my head.
Author's Response: Luna, I never meant to leave everyone hanging. Believe it or not, I have this story finished, I just need to get it uploaded. To be honest, there is really only the epilogue left. I thought about writing more with Thomas, but it felt forced. Maybe I should add some more before the epilogue. What do you think? I am always interested in readers' opinions. I did begin writing a sort-of sequel to 'Moonlit Memories' that focused on Remus and his search for the spell book that Thomas found. I really need to finish that story, but no seemed interested in reading it except me! :) Thank you so much for your comments. I will upload the epilogue and hopefully it will be up soon. Feel free to contact me on my LJ to let me know your opinions on the extra chapters. |
MelanieHill |
2006.04.14 - 03:59PM |
14: Chapter 14 |
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This was great! I'm glad they finally admitted their love for eachother. I wonder how Thomas will take the "rejection". I look forward to the next chapter. |
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