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JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 03:29PM 13: Chapter 13 Signed
Say no Serena... say no.... Dude, this is scaring me! He wants her to be away? I like Sev with her better, she needs him more and he needs her more... and I run out of things to say! It's a Sev/oc anyway! I like sev/oc! I love that... I like this story! I hope nothing bad happens! ~Meli

Author's Response: Of course she wouldn't choose Thomas- at least I hope not! :) Serena has more sense than that. It is a Severus/OC. That is what I started writing and now I am branching out into other pairings. :)

JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 03:16PM 12: Chapter 12 Signed
Nice! And funny when McGonagall and Dumbledore said "Someone I know has an interest in poetry". ;) Nice work... now what will happen to Sev and Serena... ~Meli

Author's Response: I think that is my favorite chapter. Even if no one else liked that part I still would have kept it in! I love reading all your comments!

JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 03:03PM 11: Chapter 11 Signed
I knew it! *gives a triumphant look* I knew that it was him!!!! Why did he have to turn up??? I thought (well, from all the clues that he was still alive) he was dead! But that's a good kind of outer-conflict... ~Meli

Author's Response: Yes, all the clues did point to his death, but I had to create some conflict- lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 02:44PM 10: Chapter 10 Signed
How cute! (they both wished each other a Happy Christmas. :) I like the way you write Severus and how hard it is to be so kind to another person.) Now the question is: what about her 'boyfriend'? ~Meli

Author's Response: Thank you! That is a very nice compliment. Don't worry! All your questions will be answered soon enough! :)

JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 02:41PM 9: Chapter 9 Signed
Is the presence Remus? It makes sence, because Remus is a werewolf and she thinks that that species is very interesting... (as do I. ;) ) I'm going to read ahead to find out... ~Meli

Author's Response: By now I think you know who the presence is. :) Thank you so much for being a faithful reviewer!

JamesandLily4ever 2006.08.22 - 02:40PM 8: Chapter 8 Signed
I don't remember him being Serena's keeper, but your story is going the right way. ;) I like Serena's character, but I don't understand the thing about her boyfriend... I like this story anyway. :) ~Meli

Author's Response: He's not really Serena's keeper, Dumbledore just keeps pushing Severus and Serena together so he feels responsible. The boyfriend will make more sense in the later chapters. I am glad that you are enjoying it!

Lunasnape 2006.08.21 - 09:30AM 15: Epilogue Anonymous
Awwwwwwwwww. That was so cute! I loved this story! Plz contact me if you ever write anymore SS/OC fics again plz. Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol. *LS*

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kick in the pants! :) I really should have posted the epilogue sooner. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I will certainly let you know if I write any more SS/OC. :) Thank you for everything!

vailaaa 2006.06.19 - 03:19PM 14: Chapter 14 Anonymous
Hi, I have just read the story. It is just wonderful - I like the developement of the plot. Chapter 14 filled with emotions! But there hasen't been a new chapter for a long time as it seems and I wonder when are you going to post anew chapter, Olivialynlee?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I apologize for the long wait. I hate that when authors so that and then I do the same. I am really sorry! I will upload the last chapter this week. It is just a nice little epilogue to tie up my loose ends. Thanks for reading and I again profusely apologize for my delay!! :)

LunaSnape 2006.04.25 - 02:30PM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
Ahhh, that was so wonderful *tear*. I would realy like for you to update soon so I can stop imagining what Thomas is going to do... It's pretty bad in my head.

Author's Response: Luna, I never meant to leave everyone hanging. Believe it or not, I have this story finished, I just need to get it uploaded. To be honest, there is really only the epilogue left. I thought about writing more with Thomas, but it felt forced. Maybe I should add some more before the epilogue. What do you think? I am always interested in readers' opinions. I did begin writing a sort-of sequel to 'Moonlit Memories' that focused on Remus and his search for the spell book that Thomas found. I really need to finish that story, but no seemed interested in reading it except me! :) Thank you so much for your comments. I will upload the epilogue and hopefully it will be up soon. Feel free to contact me on my LJ to let me know your opinions on the extra chapters.

MelanieHill 2006.04.14 - 03:59PM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
This was great! I'm glad they finally admitted their love for eachother. I wonder how Thomas will take the "rejection". I look forward to the next chapter.

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