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| tangerine dream | 2011.03.17 - 06:34PM | 1: | Signed |
| So sad, but beautiful! | |||
| morgaine_dulac | 2008.03.08 - 05:47PM | 1: | Signed |
| Slash is not really my favourite but I just couldn't stop reading. Brilliantly written! I will have to check out more of your work. Thank you for sharing. Author's Response: Oh yes, "slash is not my thing" is the single most frequent comment I get on my slash stories here at Occlumency! So thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. | |||
| i3luebyrd | 2008.02.26 - 06:31PM | 1: | Signed |
| The descriptions are so very rich throughout. The image of Snape's filthy hair and "nose poking through like a curse" was a great one. I don't go out of my way to read slash, but this one was just decadent to read. Like you said, the sex is secondary here and even I could enjoy the overflow of emotion (good and bad).
Also, dare I ask, who was the woman they were talking about? Does that make them bi? And does this mean I have a chance at a threesome (ok, last one is a joke). Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was written just after HBP came out, so I was processing the new Remus/Tonks information. The woman they are talking about is Tonks, as Snape has found out that Remus has been seeing her. I suppose, yes, that might make him bisexual. I like to think of sexuality as a fluid thing that doesn't always fit into the categories we've invented for it. :) | |||
| glamur | 2007.07.28 - 04:30PM | 1: | Signed |
| This is beautiful. I love the way you write, and you put across desperate longing very well. Thanks for writing it! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) | |||
| AddieVonShrapnel | 2006.08.01 - 10:59PM | 1: | Signed |
| I only have one word to describe this... Beautiful. Thank you so very, very much for sharing this with all of us. <3 Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) | |||
| aerynfire | 2005.09.28 - 08:43PM | 1: | Signed |
| I'm so glad you posted it here! This is an amazing fic...so full of emotion and angst. I still don't like Wormtail (heh), but I felt for him in this. You truely have an amazing gift...it is rare I read an author that makes me feel what the character's feel and feel for them at the same time. Kudos, gal! ~Aeryn Author's Response: I did try especially for sensory detail here, for Peter and, by extension, the reader - so I'm very glad to hear it worked. Yay. :) | |||
| rayvyn2k | 2005.09.28 - 08:40PM | 1: | Signed |
| You know that slash is not my cup of tea, but I must read yours, always. I love the way you write, how you weave all the textures and emotions throughout every one of your stories, the "sex" in them is secondary to me. I love your style, I love the way you use words, and you often make me cry. That is the mark of a true artist to me and I'm so glad that you share your gift so generously. I can't wait to read the next one. Author's Response: Thank you, doll. The sex *is* supposed to be secondary here, or at least a symbol of what they share(d), rather than sex for its own sake. I'm glad that worked for you. :) | |||
| smoke | 2005.09.28 - 10:18AM | 1: | Signed |
| Good heavens! Here too? I love this story, I really do... Author's Response: I whored it at all the archives that feature the main characters... because I'm a whore. Hell, it took me two months to write it, I'm going to wring every drop of attention I can from the damn thing. :) Thanks for all the help, lovey. | |||
| ZahariaCelestina | 2005.09.28 - 09:16AM | 1: | Signed |
| My dear, this was simply amazing! You captured the essence of Wormtail most beautifully. I have been litterally enrapted by your style right from the first paragraph! It is not the first time I read your work, and once more, I am amazed! Two thumbs up! This ficlet is filled with very intense emotions and yet everything is very delicately described and illustrated, even roughness. Beautiful, beautiful! Keep writing! Author's Response: Thank you! That is a lovely review indeed. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) | |||
| TRE | 2005.09.28 - 12:16AM | 1: | Signed |
| Well I don't prefer slash at all. And I didn't see the warning (thank you for doing that) but I must confess that prior to ditching at the moment I realized where this was headed--this was a GREAT way to start the story. Excellent characterization and writing from Wormtail's POV. It was so realistic that I HAD to ditch because this is the type of writing that stays with you. Makes you remember the story a couple of years later. And unfortunately with slash, I just can't do that. So in essence your story was TOO good. But I'll definately remember that little glimpse into Pettrigrew's head and how on the spot your writing was. Author's Response: I did spend a disproportionate amount of time on the first paragraph, so I'm delighted to hear that it was so good. The last paragraph is even better, though, should you ever decide to finish the story. Thanks for reviewing. I think. | |||
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