Reviews for Dark Coil
mkwiant |
2012.10.04 - 07:52PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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WHEW... but can you write Snape. I love your characterization. I can't wait to read more. I'm intreagued about their past, and I love the idea of Olivia being McGonnagall's daughter!
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Melpomene Erato |
2004.05.07 - 11:52PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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I happen to agree that technique is more gripping than physical beauty. |
Skjeve |
2004.01.20 - 04:30PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
Anonymous |
I am intrigued! This is a wonderfully well-written piece, with the right hint of darkness and an original premise. Olivia is sympathetic without being burdensome, and Maxwell seems interesting indeed (saith the irrepressible adorer of homosexual men).
The only possible improvement I could suggest is that Snape seems entirely too polite at the party... attributable, perhaps, to keeping Dumbledore happy and Minerva from hexing certain anatomy into oblivion.
All in all, a good read; I'm glad I found it :) Can't wait for updates! |
Shelob |
2004.01.20 - 06:07AM |
5: Chapter 5 |
Anonymous |
OOOHH! Your fic is here!! YAY!! |
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