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Reviews for Yes, but...

Greyfalcon 2005.09.20 - 07:16PM 8: Eight Signed
Just wanted to say, I love the way you write, and I also enjoy how you make Snape so snarky in a life and death situation.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) One of the things that really annoys me in many fics is the way Snape comes to the rescue like a knight on a white charger. Not that I doubt he LOVES doing it (for the feeling of power, etc.), but at the same time, I can't really see him all that pleasant about it.

mwk 2005.09.20 - 07:02PM 8: Eight Signed
You truely found funny...wickedly black humor! Thanks

Author's Response: Whohoo! Thank you!

ZahariaCelestina 2005.09.20 - 10:08AM 8: Eight Anonymous
Thanks for updating! Yes, some parts of a novel are always hard to write, for some reason, even if you perfectly know where the plot is going. Good shot on this one, though, a bit darker indeed, but still has a very definite feel that is undoubtedly *you*. Two thumbs up again, I am still enjoying this story very much and I like the very believable way their relationship is evolving. I love the image of the "Potions Master in action"... but I am a little puzzled by the fact that he only kicked off his boots before going into bed. ;o)

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad that this chapter is being received well - I've had a sleepless night or two over it. Things should be a bit more chipper next chapter - but with Mr. Doom and Gloom on board, you never really know.

Oh, and as for your remark about the boots - what were you expecting?

Lydia 2005.09.20 - 09:50AM 8: Eight Anonymous
I'm so glad you updated! “If you are going to insist on being this deliberately obtuse for the duration of our marriage, I shall have to permanently drug one of us into oblivion" I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lydia! Phew! I'm really glad you liked it. I think my favorite part of that particular line is that Snape's not quite certian which of them he'd rather drug into oblivion....

duj 2005.09.20 - 02:55AM 8: Eight Signed
You'd think saving Tonks' life would bring him Brownie points from all of her friends but they'll probably find a way to blame him instead.

Author's Response: Lol. And the reward for "most interesting take on the chapter" goes to Ms. Duj! It's something to think about, certainly.

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