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Tia Calenture 2005.12.14 - 10:32PM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
'a spy for on him from the Dark...' Is this grammatically correct?? How did she remain calm in the face of his fury?? Wow. And the kiss she laid on his mark, oh my, made my heart melt. This is the story that should have been made into a movie. If Alan had played this part when he was 37.... that would have been a multi-billion dollar movie! I want to see him do this story!!!!! Well, maybe not now, at his age. This sucks, why couldn't you have written this 25 yrs ago?? Well it probably would have sat on some romance shelf gathering dust. (I love this story)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for catching that! I've only just today had time to fix it, but I really appreciate that you took the time to point it out. The Holidays were very hectic for my family, but updates should once again resume with relative frequency. *grins* Thank you for your kind words about my story--I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Andie Bubbles 2005.09.14 - 04:39PM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
Absolutely wonderful! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I'm working on edits of the next chapters now, and there are chapters in the queue. I'm trying to make sure my readers don't have to wait too long between updates. I'm very glad you are enjoying my story.

snapehp 2005.09.13 - 01:12AM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
Tonks going undercover....this is getting good. Once again, great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been told that there are times when the suspense is a little too intense, but I hope overall people will find this an enjoyable read.

Midnightshadows 2005.09.12 - 09:48PM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
Awe thats sweet. Severus is finally allowing himself, although reluctantly as expected, to have some comfort and happiness in his life. I thoughly enjoyed the little things you wrote like that of her kissing her fingers and placing them on the Dark Mark, it's always the little things like that that seem to put people off. Severus is lowering his defences with her it seems and at first that seems to be a good thing but then again I can't help thinking that it is going to bit him on the butt in future chapters. I agree that Katrina will have withdrawal symptoms if she gets fostered by another family and not be allowed to see Severus. She has her knight in shinging black armour! you can't take that away form a three, or is it four?, year old girl. Remus is finally lightrning up up unfortunally that wont last for long as if Tonks is going to do what she must. Oh well at least I have an Interesting Chapter to look forward to. What will Draco think about his head of house 'dating'? and a Lupin at that? Only time will tell.

Author's Response: *grin* Yes, Severus is reluctant. Sometimes it seems as though the man must be hit over the head with a mallet. Then again, his legitimate concerns are not unfounded. Much more to come, I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.

EXECUTR 2005.09.12 - 06:33PM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
Great story! Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you're enjoying it. The next chapters are in the hands of various betas, so you should see them soon.

EXECUTR 2005.09.12 - 06:33PM 13: Chapter 13: Darkness Calls Signed
Great story! Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you--there is definitely more to come. I am glad you've enjoyed it so far, and hope you will continue to do so.




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