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| revolsepans | 2005.12.02 - 06:17PM | 12: Chapter 12: Family Issues | Signed |
| Snogging with Snape. That would be my ideal passtime. You've handled the interaction between Katrina/Snape/Weasleys quite well. This could have been a rough spot, turning quite gushy and sentimental. But you've maintained what dignity Severus can muster in a situation with a child clinging to him. He doesn't have to be out of character for this interaction to happen. Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. I don't like a gushy/mushy/sentimental Snape, so it's something I worry about all the time, making him too out-of-character. I think he is a man capable of very, very deep and intense feeling--but I think he likes to conceal that fact as much as possible--even from himself. I always appreciate it when someone tells me specific ideas on Snape's characterisation, especially if they find him 'off' so I can fix it. I'm glad you think I did okay here. :) Thank you! | |||
| Tia Calenture | 2005.09.20 - 04:39AM | 12: Chapter 12: Family Issues | Signed |
| Much better kissing scene between Severus and Rowena. In all these chapters I can't believe that Rowena is not jumping up and down (inside)like a squeeling fangirly, thinking "This is Severus! I am actually standing; talking; arguing; kissing; sitting beside; or wrapped in the arms of Severus!" After all those years of watching him; photographing; staring at his photos; waiting, listening for, and prying information about him. Author's Response: LOL! Good point. I think, very deep inside, she probably is. But then, she does pride herself on trying to be rational and logical. *wink* I'm really very pleased with the improvements overall as the story moves along. There were some 'tangent ideas' that I started here and there which I never followed through with because they just didn't seem to fit as the story progressed. I'll be snipping those out, painlessly I hope, so that everything is smoother overall. And yes, I'll be 'enhancing' the Lemons and Limes as well. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying the story! | |||
| Midnightshadows | 2005.09.12 - 03:14AM | 12: Chapter 12: Family Issues | Signed |
| Hehehe...Severus is having to be less professer and more man. Thats entertaining. If onlt he had been more like that in the begining then noone of this would have happened....Well I'm blantently lying arn't I? Seriously though It's good that Severus has to deal with stuff like that cause it will be even better when Rowena and himself get futher on down the track. Wont it be interesting if Severus ends up having guardianship over little Katrina. Well although I'm not entirally opposed to the idea (quite the opposite really) I think its just to early for that to work out well. I like that you are adding restraint to your scenes when they are together. Because in reality they are like teenagers exploring the 'forbidden' territory of the opposite sex and lets face it when you get that intimate for the first time its hard not to restrain yourself but it's in their character to do just that....hey if worse came to worse you could always let Rowena burn him with that little tallent of hers, not that its ever going to get there. Severus is a real gentleman on the inside and although he is a scheming little Syltherin he really is a perfect match for the level-headed Ravenclaw. I like that Severus took her down into his room as well this time. That was a cleaver idea. Not only does it show that he is opening up more to her now but that also he want's to spend a lot of time with her even when the students come back to school, and, not one to give up his facade of the 'brooding bat', it makes sence that he would travel to her rooms through the connecting doors and vice verser. Good job it brightens up my studing days. ^^ Author's Response: Oh, yes, I'm afraid there is a lot of ups and downs in store for these two--well, three if you count Katrina. I don't think it would be realistic to have him simply 'understand' how to be part of a relationship of any sort when he's been striving very hard all of his life to avoid any such thing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you for the review. | |||
| snapehp | 2005.09.10 - 03:02AM | 12: Chapter 12: Family Issues | Signed |
| It keeps getting better and better! I love the romance in this chapter, but I really love the bond between Katrina and Severus. I can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you are enjoying it. There is a great deal more to come, we aren't even half through yet. I always enjoy hearing what the readers are thinking as they read the story. | |||
| EXECUTR | 2005.09.09 - 05:35PM | 12: Chapter 12: Family Issues | Signed |
| Great story. Please keep writing! Author's Response: Oh, I will! This story is complete, it is just going through its final beta-polish for archiving here. I have a problem with homicidal abuse of punctuation, which I am gradually learning to rectify--with a great deal of help. But you won't have to fear 'writer's block' holding up the story, because it is complete through the epilogue. Thank you for your comment, I am glad you are enjoying it. | |||
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