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revolsepans 2005.12.02 - 04:47PM 9: Chapter 9: Dwelling in Darkness Signed
I want to ride a thestral.....with Severus. OK, maybe I want to do ANYTHING with Severus. This chapter has nice balance showing snarky, unsure Severus pulling back from Rowena's overwhelming trust of and feelings for him.

Author's Response: heh--Me too! :) The thestral bit, I mean. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Midnightshadows 2005.09.06 - 05:46PM 9: Chapter 9: Dwelling in Darkness Signed
Well they don't seem to be on friendly terms right now do they? And just when there was some hope for them. It was all going well and now when they decide to talk and be honest with each other they can't be honest with themselves. That's got to be annoying to no ends for Rowena. Nice ending however, I especially like the refrence to Severus not finding the way out of the darkness but merely living with in. Well written and now I can't wait for the tention in the future chapters...and they have to pretend to be dating. What a horrible pridicament you have placed them in, angery at each other yet they have to be civil to keep up the maskarade. Nice :) Look forward to Chapter 10.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I really don't think Severus considers himself 'out' of Darkness at all. I do believe that any relationship with him would be a roller-coaster ride of ups and downs until he found some level of peace within himself--as indeed this story will reflect. The story is complete, it is just going through final beta-polishing. Updates will continue to be regular until it is complete here.

GreenEyes 2005.09.06 - 10:18AM 9: Chapter 9: Dwelling in Darkness Signed
Wow...the two of them are such mental messes, they deserve each other. :) Stubborn. So stubborn. More, please? I'll send you chocolate...

Author's Response: Ooohh... Promises of chocolate! I ususally have to bribe people to review with such promises. Of course there is more--and yes, they are each a bit of a mess, aren't they? I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Tia Calenture 2005.09.06 - 06:13AM 9: Chapter 9: Dwelling in Darkness Signed
OH!! What an Infuriating man!! He will regret this!! How can he not, it was just his raw emotions turned to defensive and offense. His own mind and heart will work on him and he will remember every word she said, just like the songs. He will try to remain hard, but her indomitable spirit will make weird things happen inside. Must go read and see what happpens.

Author's Response: Yes, he is infuriating, but he also knows what to say to truly make her *think*. He did have a point, no matter how unkindly stated. It's good for her, trust me. Chapter ten will go into the queue for validation later today, I just need to do the HTML tags, and chapter 11 is going to my final beta then, too. I won't keep you waiting long, I promise. Glad you are enjoying the story.

snapehp 2005.09.06 - 03:31AM 9: Chapter 9: Dwelling in Darkness Signed
Wow! That remark got to her! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, yes indeed. One thing is certain--he may be confused a bit himself in this strange situation, but he is still Snape--he knows just what to say to 'push' someone's buttons. I'm glad you enjoyed. I'll be putting the next chapter in the queue for validation later today. Thanks for your comment.

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