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Reviews for Lost Souls Found

sarabella76 2006.07.20 - 02:48AM 6: Chapter 6: Summons and Orders Signed
Who knew Voldemort would be a match maker? I just want to smack Severus upside the head. When will he figure out he likes her? Idiot.

revolsepans 2005.12.02 - 11:17AM 6: Chapter 6: Summons and Orders Signed
WOW. Are you thrilled with how this chapter turned out? I am. In the original version, did you have Severus explain his assignment as her suitor with or without Dumbledore in the room? I can't remember. Well, however it was, it's truly brilliant now. Hey, I would love to be able to read the original alongside your final product. Do you have it on AFF as it was or are you updating there as well?

Author's Response: *beams* Yes, I am thrilled with how it turned out. I felt, in the original version of the story, that Severus was too willing to be too revealing too early on. I tried to tone that down a bit without losing the important points, leaving more 'in his head' than spoken, those sorts of things. Eventually, I hope to have the story be uniform at any archive to which I post it--though the 'lemons' will be editied for FFN, as always. I also intend to remove it, in its entirety, from AFF, along with the prologue and one minor femme-slash piece I've written that is posted here at Eros and Sappho. I am not happy with some of the goings-on there. When the story is completely archived here, I be removing it from AFF. At this time, only through Chapter 9 has been updated at those other two archives. I just haven't had time to go back and post the edited versions there. Anything after chapter 9 is the 'original'. :)

Tia Calenture 2005.09.05 - 12:01AM 6: Chapter 6: Summons and Orders Signed
Safety?? How?? I don't understand. And weren't they being seen together before?? Couldn't Severus just have told Voldemort that he had already been courting her?? In a subtle way he was, he was her protector, that can be quite compelling for some females.

Author's Response: Very true, he had assigned himself as her protector to and from St. Mungo's. But he had not made any effort to be 'seen' with her amongst his Death Eater associates, nor any attempt to relate with her beyond the professional. Most of their interactions prior to this point were actually deliberately concealed from the Death Eaters, as they were on Albus' orders to watch out for her and protect her. Only the St. Mungo's visit was at all 'public', and even then it is questionable whether or not they were seen together there. This is a fundamental change of his 'orders' from his darker 'Master'.

GreenEyes 2005.09.01 - 05:07AM 6: Chapter 6: Summons and Orders Signed
Oh God...why do I sense trouble coming? Snape on a date...that will be interesting. :) At least you don't seem the type to turn him into sappy!Snape in any 'romantic setting'. You have no idea how nice it is to read a fic where he's IC (well, OotP IC) lol

Author's Response: *veg* Well... hmmmmm. What reference would be appropriate? Oh, I know--have you ever watched Babylon 5? The very creepy voice saying, at the start of each eppisode, "And So It Begins" would be very appropriate right about here. *adds maniacal cackle to the very evil grin*. But no, you won't see Sappy Snape here. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

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