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Reviews for Lost Souls Found

sarabella76 2006.07.20 - 01:45AM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
Snape is so lovably snarky. And she sure has his number. I love that she isn't afraid of him and won't back down even when he tries to push her away. Love it!

revolsepans 2005.12.01 - 07:22PM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
"Now, either be helpful or belt it.” Ha!! Very funny. Did you delete a storyline about the court reporter suffering from some sort of hex for revealing court proceedings? (Or was that another story?) If indeed from LSF, then kudos for cutting that loose string. It was a bit confusing and tangiential. Really, I'm so impressed with your revision so far. I've read this story at least 4 times on AFF, but it's very fresh for me with your changes. Changes that totally enhance the story. Good job.

Author's Response: Heehee-this accidentally got posted twice, but that's okay. ;) I'm still glad you're enjoying the story and that the changes have made it 'better' for you. ;)

revolsepans 2005.12.01 - 07:16PM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
"Now, either be helpful or belt it.” Ha!! Very funny. Did you delete a storyline about the court reporter suffering from some sort of hex for revealing court proceedings? (Or was that another story?) If indeed from LSF, then kudos for cutting that loose string. It was a bit confusing and tangiential. Really, I'm so impressed with your revision so far. I've read this story at least 4 times on AFF, but it's very fresh for me with your changes. Changes that totally enhance the story. Good job.

Author's Response: Nope, that was this story, and I did delete it for the same reasons you said. It really wasn't important to the theme of the story. I'm trying to really make it a tighter story and eliminate those odd 'threads' where I never followed through with sideline ideas. It means a lot to me that you noticed! :)

Marianne 2005.11.22 - 08:38AM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
Oh, I like this line: “You can save your ‘I’m an evil demon’ act for my brother and Alastor Moody." Rowena is a remarkable peron.

Author's Response: Heh. Thank you! There are many little spots like that where I think she hits Snape right between the eyes, and that is one of them. She's perhaps just a little blindly stubborn which will get her in trouble eventually, I'm afraid, but she does know how to stand her ground. ;)

Tia Calenture 2005.09.04 - 04:43AM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
Oh this was such a great chapter, I was afraid, I laughed uproarously, I smirked, I admired her courage. Snape....well he is...Oh how do I describe that man! lol.

Author's Response: I think the word you are looking for to describe our beloved Potions master is--Snape is so very Snape. ;) It seems there is no other word to define him. He is by far my favorite character and I strive very hard to keep him IN character through out the fic. I'm glad you're enjoying it

GreenEyes 2005.08.25 - 07:18PM 4: Chapter 4: New Daily Routines Signed
Ooh, ferret. Sorry, I love ferrets... :) I have four. Very nice chapter! Poor thing, having to teach bratty children. Lol. I feel for her. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hehe. My hubby bought me an Albino Ferret (are you thinking Draco Malfoy here?) for my 21st birthday when we were still just dating. I adored her. I am sorry to say that Vixen isn't very visible in this fic, but you'll see glimpses of her now and then. I needed to pick a unique animal that I still knew a little something about! Heh. Glad you liked the chapter, next one soon.




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