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| greenwood | 2005.09.08 - 05:12PM | 4: Chapter Two | Signed |
| You handel the Mikayla character very well and I think she adds a lot of depth to this story - sort of a "back door" to her moms character and a reflection of Severus at a distance. This story is coming along very well and I do so look forward to more. I can't help but get a little mad at Severus for his superficial thoughts about Maggie (but I love the agnst too!) but I'm sure it is because of his past experience. You have given him 'wide spaces' to grow and make mistakes under his new life - I love it! Author's Response: Thank you so much, greenwood! I worry about writing Mikayla because I don't know that many six year olds, but the ones I do know are pretty intelligent and have a lot of interesting thoughts. Severus is being rather... superficial sums it up very well. But we'll see if he grows or if he just makes mistakes. I think he might learn how to live. Thank you again! ~Lisa | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.09.08 - 04:48PM | 3: Interlude One | Signed |
| Typical! Doesn't even know what he's supposed to be sorry for ;) Author's Response: Truly typical of Harry. He's usually pretty clueless. Thanks, Melpomene! ~Lisa | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.09.08 - 04:41PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| Cute kid, and a true angel to put up with mommy's constant working hours. Alas, what is our world coming to? Author's Response: Thanks, Melpomene! Neither of them have a choice, but they are together and that's what's important. ~Lisa | |||
| Lady Whitehart | 2005.09.08 - 04:39PM | 4: Chapter Two | Signed |
| Alpha Pi Epsilon = APE Yes, there was a chapter at my university, and APE described them perfectly.;^) Ahh the college memories... It's a good thing that Snape didn't see it fit to deal with them -- yet. Author's Response: Thank you, Lady Whitehart! It was just too easy for them to be called APE. :-) Snape may see fit to step in soon. I used to have college memories, but I think the shock treatment finally got rid of them. :-) ~Lisa | |||
| phoenix | 2005.09.08 - 04:35PM | 4: Chapter Two | Signed |
| Another nice addition. I like reading about the conflict both of them are having internally. It was definitely in character for Snape to blast things when upset. I'm interested in seeing what he decides to do and whether or not he will resort to a lust potion. I hope not, but I suppose I'll see. ;) Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phoenix! Snape is certainly frustrated for a man who spent two days in a brothel. What he will resort to... and why... I'll definitely be covering that. :-) ~Lisa | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.09.08 - 04:25PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Great start! On to the next! Author's Response: Thank you, Melpomene Erato! I hope you keep enjoying it. ~Lisa | |||
| Gannet | 2005.09.03 - 05:03PM | 3: Interlude One | Signed |
| This is a great story. Thank you for writing! Author's Response: Thank you so much, Gannet! I'm glad you're enjoying this! ~Lisa | |||
| Gannet | 2005.09.03 - 04:59PM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
| SNAPE and BREAST-FEEDING !
Thank you for the laugh at the end of this wonderful chapter :) Author's Response: Thank you, Gannet! I can promise you, that might just pop up later. :-) ~Lisa | |||
| Verity Brown | 2005.09.01 - 08:08PM | 3: Interlude One | Signed |
| Harry's conviction that Severus is alive just sends chills up my spine. And the way he treats Ginny just enrages me. But Severus better get to New Orleans while he has the chance. Come the end of that summer, that's going to be a problem. Are you going to put the hurricane in your story, since it's in the right time frame? Author's Response: Thank you so much, Verity. Harry is definitely a man obsessed. I've thought about the hurricane... I can't see writing about a tragedy like that. As it is, I am too upset by it. I cannot use it for entertainment purposes. ~Lisa | |||
| merryday | 2005.08.31 - 02:10AM | 3: Interlude One | Signed |
| Wonderful! Very interesting HBP compliant plot - can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you so much, merryday! I'm glad you're enjoying it! ~Lisa | |||
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