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| anodyne | 2005.11.27 - 08:48PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| NO! Oh, I'm going to go cry now! Author's Response: Sorry! It was a sad story. The story I recc'ed by Pigwidgeon is a good one to cheer up by. :-) | |||
| Eres | 2005.11.27 - 04:03PM | 2: Two | Anonymous |
| wow is all i can manage at this point in time.
That was phenomenal... cant say enough about how insightful it is... Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're very kind. :D | |||
| KarenDetroit | 2005.11.14 - 08:56PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| NO need to apologise; your story is eminently plausible, given what little we are allowed to know about the Snapes (and it's pathetically little). Marvelously done; I doubt I could keep that kind of pressure up for even two chapters. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and didn't find it too depressing. :D | |||
| caz | 2005.10.26 - 10:44PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| I couldn't quite see how all the things we learnt about Severus's parents could fit together, but this is a very plausible explanation. I can really see this young Severus with his fascination for science transferring that interest into potions.
The end is perfect, I love the way his mother's anger becomes directed at all Muggles. His reaction to his first hex is perfectly illustrated and I can see why he would arrive at Hogwarts knowing so many hexes. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear it made kogical sense, and held together. I agree that it's a little hard to see how Snape's background produced the man we know in canon. Everyone thought he was pureblood, and he wasn't... | |||
| ZahariaCelestina | 2005.09.21 - 07:58AM | 2: Two | Anonymous |
| Great story, mouse! It's not the first time I review/read your work, and really, what you do is varied and high quality! I found the tone most appropriate in this one, though some parts tended to drag on a little bit. Overall, however, the interpretation you made of Severus' past was absolutely brilliant, a very, very nice and innovative change from the "his father was an alcoholic and beat him up" trend that we almost all fell into. I particularly liked how you very delicately blended Severus' personality traits from both his parents. That was very well done. Two thumbs up, you're a great and versatile author! Author's Response: Thank you so much, ZahariaCelestina! (which bits were boring? Tell me, tell me; I wanna get better!) This is such a nice review; you've made my day! I fell into that "Snape's father was a jerk" trap too, but something about the way Eileen Prince was described in HBP just didn't seem in keeping with her being a doormat. That got me thinking, and this story resulted. Thanks again, for a lovely review! | |||
| Fluffy Bat | 2005.09.17 - 09:28PM | 2: Two | Anonymous |
| Wow! 50 million points to whatever house 'mouse' is in.
The part concerning Severus' first ever hex was terrific and his parents' marital breakdown positively heart rending.
Please write more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fluffy Bat! What a nice review! More of my stories are hosted on Sycophant Hex's Occlumency archive, and can be found by searching for 'mouse' under the Members link at the top of the page. | |||
| Fluffy Bat | 2005.09.17 - 09:00PM | 1: One | Anonymous |
| Ooooooh,I like this!
This is delightful;well thought out,,imaginative,believable chararacters,brilliant dialogue and descriptive passages,perfect spelling and grammar!
The description of the bullies' actions are so realistically nasty that I agree with Severus- Eileen should turn the ring leader into a frog.
I can bearly wait to see how 'mouse' continues this Severus story......must go....must read...more......
[Incidently,my own nickname at school was also 'Mouse',because I was small, fast and easily overlooked;in the German language,'Fliedermaus' means 'flying mouse'-a bat.Just thought you'd like to know.] Author's Response: Hi, Fluffy Bat (I love bats :-D); thanks so much for your very kind comments! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. | |||
| squeaker1940 | 2005.08.21 - 07:32PM | 2: Two | Anonymous |
| i liked your story a lot .hbp gave me a severe case of depression too. i still love severus even more now. please continue to write about him. you will help to save our sanity. Author's Response: Thank you! I love Snape more than ever now too, regardless of whether he turns out good or evil (although I'm still desperately hoping he's still a goodie). :) | |||
| vampmissedith | 2005.08.21 - 05:54AM | 2: Two | Signed |
| Good story. It's a very believable beginnibg for Snape. I like the characterization. I like the whole thing, really. Trust me, I'm in a bit of a "funk" too. Very well done. Your version of kid Severus reminds me of my young cousin, actually. His family is sort of like the one you wrote for Snape, only the father and mother's roles have reversed and I hope they stay together. Anyway, well done. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. | |||
| Savannah | 2005.08.20 - 03:21AM | 2: Two | Anonymous |
| That was excellent. *Must give compliments for the good fic.* I hope to see more by you in the future. Snape ISN'T evil *nods* yup, he had to, and I'm sticking to it *sniffle*, hopefully. Author's Response: Thanks so much, Savannah! And yes, let's all keep clinging to the drifting wreckage of the "Snape is good" boat - hopefully JKR will toss us that much-hoped-for life preserver in the next book. :D | |||
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