Reviews for Connected
Vocalion |
2004.09.24 - 12:35PM |
15: Weekend Retreat Part Two |
Anonymous |
Ah, love is in the air, and these reviews I'm leaving aren't the least bit constructive, are they? But I'm still reading and still reviewing, so that should be some indication that I love this story. Now what about the werewolf thing - is Remus still one, or isn't he? |
Vocalion |
2004.09.24 - 08:04AM |
14: Weekend Retreat Part One |
Anonymous |
Purple is my favorite new color! Brother Richard Allenman? You like to double your pleasure, don't you?
I'm enjoying this fic very much. Fluffy Snape works for me, as long as Meri keeps zinging him. |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 11:01PM |
13: Lessons |
Anonymous |
YES!YES! I'll have what Meri's having. Severus Snape AND Ella Fitzgerald referenced within the same chapter. All that's missing is chocolate. Now I like the Flying Lesson illustration even more! |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 10:33PM |
12: The Waiting is the Hardest Part |
Anonymous |
Hmm. Better a virgin than a dallying Death Eater, I suppose. When I think of all those little frock coat buttons just going to waste... |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 07:24PM |
11: Romance in the Making |
Anonymous |
Oh boy, I can't wait for the flying lesson. Even though you write incredibly well, a picture is worth a thousand words. (Inside joke.)
Love the private Pool of Requirement that the castle was good enough to rearrange. |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 06:52PM |
10: Insecurities |
Anonymous |
Still reading...still enjoying...there's nothing to really criticize here. We seem to have the same slant on Snape. Some writers never allow the poor guy to have any feelings at all, just because of the insignificant little Death Eater thing. I find that highly unimaginative, and I prefer my Snape with all his delicious vulnerabilities. By the way, what about Remus? Is he still a werewolf, and will you be addressing that in an upcoming chapter? |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 03:48PM |
9: Anything's Better With Karaoke |
Anonymous |
A Charlotte Church reference. This is becoming truly frightening!
I love the image of Snape reading the Harry Potter books. Another fine chapter. I like Meri. I don't feel she's a Mary Sue, or even a Meri Sue. She's a good match for Snape. |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 02:56PM |
8: Black is the Color of my Heart's Desire |
Anonymous |
Yow! This chapter works for me. Now you know why my fic is full of jokes. One can only write what one knows... Keep it coming! |
Vocalion |
2004.09.23 - 01:02PM |
7: The Spy Who Loved me but Suppressed the Urge |
Anonymous |
This is a very funny chapter. I like to see Snape get zinged by Meri. The little touches you throw in are clever - the CHAMBER CHARMS book and the Living Paint Potion. I much prefer Hermione being buds with the OC than shipped with Snape! |
Vocalion |
2004.09.22 - 10:44PM |
6: Paradigm Shift |
Anonymous |
You write descriptions so well. I want that bathroom! I liked Dumbledore's take on Slytherin House. Will Meri be singing for us soon? |
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