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Reviews for Wounded

Obadiah Slope 2005.08.30 - 04:27PM 3: A New Way of Life Signed
Severus is blind and magic-less?! Oh, the poor boy! I like the winding of the HBP plot into the story. It's nice that it's a story based on the book, rather than an AU. HBP was a bit of a bugger, really... threw my plotline completely out of the window!! I mean, I knew it was off...but not *that* off... I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: HBP threw me off a bit here. I'm still working on making sure I've recovered from that. You'll see more as you read about how I've worked it in...I'm glad you like what I've done so far. I honestly thought a little bit about saying "Dash it all! I'm leaving it the way it is" but I didn't. ;-)

Owlbait 2005.08.25 - 09:24PM 3: A New Way of Life Signed
ahhh, Snape magicless and helpless, and I trusted you. sniff! :*)

Author's Response: Wait! Don't be mad. Keep reading. Trust me on this one. :-) Hey, look on the brightside, he's sane. :-) Yes, he's grouchy, but he's sane. It gets better next chapter.

whitehound 2005.08.16 - 06:28PM 3: A New Way of Life Signed
Well-written, it's growing on me - but two Britpicks - should be "autumn" not "fall," and in Britain "smart" means "well-dressed."

Author's Response: Glad to hear the story is growing on you. Thanks for giving it a chance. :) Thanks again for the smart Brit-pick. I'll keep a better eye out for that one. And the autumn one as well. That's a regional US thing, too and I come from the fall part of the country. Both have been corrected. :)

caisland 2005.08.12 - 08:19PM 3: A New Way of Life Anonymous
Hi! I'm enjoying this story! Can't wait to see some more!

Author's Response: Thanks, caisland. It's pretty much done, just going through some smoothing, so no worries on this one being abandoned.

Trickie Woo 2005.08.11 - 03:44PM 3: A New Way of Life Signed
I read this yesterday and wrote a review, but I must have clicked a button wrong somewhere because it didn't show up. I like the story very much, it's a Snape is good not evil, I wouldn't have read it if it were the other way round. They seem to fill a non romantic need in each others lives, the relationship is an intriguing one. I enjoyed his relationship with the children too, Helen seems to be softening him up a bit and he enjoys working with Julia because she is very bright. Now I'm wondering. I know you are in the Navy, are you some type of medic, maybe mental hygiene or social work? You describe his treatment so well that you must be familiar with it in some way.

Author's Response: Thanks, Trickie Woo. And don't feel bad about the wrong button thing, that's up there with my forgetting the attachment on stuff I mess up all the time. I glad you like how I describe his treatment. My personal medical knowledge is limited to first aid, but both my parents are nurses, so I've heard hospital stories all my life. That and I got to nurse my hubby back from ACL reconstruction. I think I put some of him in Snape. ;-) Sick/injured men can be babies. LOL Though, I have had to deal with mentally distraught people as we didn't have anyone in mental health on the ship, so I'm a bit of an amature at that....Thanks for picking up on the relationship he has with the kids. That's a bit of a chore for me, as I don't routinely spend a lot of time around kids of any age.

June W 2005.08.10 - 07:03PM 3: A New Way of Life Anonymous
Hmm, did any Death Eaters survive, who also drank from the chalice? I wonder if that chalice is still around, and any books of Voldemort's. How did his roast turn out? I really like your characters - Aurelia, Julia, and Helen are very cool. No visits from Hogwarts staff - McGonagall, Flitwick, Pomfrey? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, June. Those are some very good questions. :) I'm glad you like my characters. I've had fun writing them and I liked the idea of Sevedrus having to deal with kids in a non-school environment when he's vulnerable. As for the Hogwarts staff, more will be revealed on that in the future. Look for the next chapter soon. A few finishing touches and it should be on it's way. :)
Jean

Zhaneraal 2005.08.10 - 02:44PM 3: A New Way of Life Signed
Yay! I'm glad that this has been updated, and moreover that you've managed to bring it in line with canon up-to-date.

Author's Response: Thanks, Zhaneraal. As the story progresses, more and more HBP events get incorporated. Thankfully, it wasn't that hard to update everything as I had already decided certain characters wouldn't be around for this story and one was one that JKR decided the same thing about.




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