Reviews for Lost Souls
GreenEyes |
2005.08.10 - 01:23AM |
3: Chapter 3: An Accidental Meeting |
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Wow, I love your Snape. He's very IC, in my opinion. Not that my opinion means much in the long run, but just thought I'd let you know! :) Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. The first beta I ever 'hired' was someone I found after learning the definition of "Mary Sue". Yes, pathetic, but when I first started writing this story, I was very new to the idea of fanfiction in any way. Elaine's primary job was to solemnly swear she would not allow Severus to become OOC or Rowena to become Mary Sue. This prologue is seven chapters, and the 'main' story is over fifty. I think Elaine did a good job of holding true to her primary mission. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Though, of course, con-crit is welcome, too. *grin* Thanks for your comment. |
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