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Overhill 2008.07.08 - 10:00PM 1: N/A Signed
This came up on the random generator, and I was surprised to see the date of the story. Congratulations on calling it! I thought it was written after the last book - it fits beautifully! Nice mood piece.

Cuccussette 2005.10.16 - 02:54PM 1: N/A Anonymous
the story is beautiful. Short, but it says a lot about Snape ! I translate this fic in --italian, I hope one day I can put in my anglo italian site, http://www.fanfictions.it/ if you don't want have translated fic for Italian readers in my site, you can always use it. I'm sending it SACRIFICIO “Allora, come se la caverebbe il Principe Mezzosangue?” Le parole vennero sparate nell’aria, impregnate di rabbia e astio e insulto. Non vennero dette davvero, però. Sembrarono penzolare lìlì, come se sempre ci fossero state, ed oscuravano l’aria del cimitero. L’atmosfera già opprimente prese un tono livido e una figura vestita dinero scivolò tra le lapidi. Aveva un boquet di gigli nella mano pallida. Si fermò davanti a una pietra tombale bianca che era sommersa da edera e erba, che rimosse con un paio di parole sussurrate. Le parole si mostrarono sulla pietra: > Lily Potter ( 1960 –1980 ) Madre amorosa, moglie adorata sacrificò tutto per dare al figlio vita e amore >. Nell’oscurità, la figura starnutì e posò i gigli sul terreno davanti alla pietra. “Mi dispiace,” sussurrò la figura, “Mi dispiace. Non posso fare altro.” La voce era decisamente maschile. Si accasciò a terra, i ginocchi affondarono nel fango, piantò una mano stanca a terra; fissava la tomba con occhi addolorati, con leggeri cenni della testa. Il cappuccio cadde indietro, e mostrò la pelle giallastra, un naso troppo grande spezzato, occhi neri privi di emozione, labbra sottili, ed un’aria malconcia. Appariva stremato. Lanciò un’occhiata alla tomba accanto a quella di lei, leggendo solo il nome: James Potter. Distolse lo sguardo dall’epitaffio, un rapido lampo dell’antico astio arrivò agli occhi prima che tornassero al loro stato di vuoto. “Allora, come se la caverebbe il Principe Mezzosangue?” la presa di giro non si sarebbe fermata. L’uomo cercò di non pensare ai giorni in cui James Potter e la sua banda lo sfottevano, e usavano i suoi stessi incantesimi contro di lui. Non era qui per quello. Si voltò di nuovo verso la tomba di Lily Potter. “E’ sempre vivo,” disse l’uomo. “Ho fatto del mio meglio.” Poi si alzò, tirò il cappuccio sulla testa, e tornò indietro per la stessa strada che aveva già fatto quando era venuto, la luna piena illuminava il camposanto di Godric Hollow con qualcosa di simile alla disperazione. ------------------- F I N E ------------

Author's Response: It's fine, actually. Feel free. I'm actually attempting to renew what had once been a rather well-used language. Well, I say well-used, but I mostly wrote it and found out off the internet. Conversations couldn't span more than fifteen minutes. I've checked out your site briefly and noticed the copyright warning: it's perfectly all right with me. (Be to sure to post a link to my profile here at Occlumency! *evil grin* I shall exploit this.) I'm so happy you liked it and deemed it worthy. It makes me smile. -Mel

Lady Whitehart 2005.10.15 - 03:17PM 1: N/A Signed
Stumbled across this and very glad I did. I still have hope for Snape. 100% convinced he has some kind of connection with Lily.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it and, yes, I sometimes believe it to. Other times, I waffle. Eh. I've learned not to trust JK. -Mel

9stonenumber8 2005.08.08 - 09:26PM 1: N/A Anonymous
really nice work. good atmosphere. i'm hoping he's everything we want him to be too...delightful dark and cold, but with a heart of gold. fingers crossed for the seventh book. =]

Author's Response: Thanks very much. We can only keep our fingers crossed and hope fervently. -Mel

Verity Brown 2005.08.08 - 07:09PM 1: N/A Signed
Argh, too short! Very lovely atmosphere, though.

Author's Response: *giggle* I am so torturing you. Thanks! -Mel

marie 2005.08.08 - 03:44AM 1: N/A Anonymous
We can only hope that he is actually a 'good-guy' in the seventh book. But,all in all,I'd have to say,this is good. Sounds like Severus was giving some reassurence to Lily about Harry,saying that he was still alive and safe? (sort of) Good story.

Author's Response: Yes, he was, in my view. Thank you very much, and yes, we can only hope. -Mel

Dorcas5 2005.08.06 - 12:54PM 1: N/A Signed
*sobs uncontrollably* *sniffles* That's beautiful,man. Severus/Lily always makes me cry... *also hugs 100% good Severus* Horrible personality,but still good...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hands over tissue* The horrible personality is what we love about him! *cheery grin* -Mel

EXECUTR 2005.08.05 - 07:48PM 1: N/A Signed
Short, but sweet. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! -Mel

bracken 2005.08.05 - 01:06PM 1: N/A Anonymous
More please! I just know he is 100% ( or a little bit less) good, regardless of what JKR says. She is just trying to mislead us! B.

Author's Response: More on this one? Eh. More Snape one-shots? *nods* Probably about, oh, 75%. Misleading is bad. *pout* Well, not all the time. *snigger* Thank you! -Mel

greenwood 2005.08.04 - 08:39PM 1: N/A Anonymous
Wonderful! A great "very well could be" moment. This seems to be just what Severus might do if he had "loved" Lily. I like the last line he speeks too...very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! There are so many possibilites as to what Severus did when he left and I want to explore them all! -Mel

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