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mkwiant 2012.10.07 - 11:51AM 43: Wisdom Exceeds Folly Signed
Well this is depressing. You have a wonderful story. I just wish you had finished it. You are excellent at characterization, and I love the expressive way that you write. Thanks for your hard work. I hope you finish this some day!

mkwiant 2012.10.07 - 12:06AM 40: Chapter 41 freaking A Signed
Love the dinner with his parents. I know it's totally not canon, but I love it. It makes sense - as to why he behaves the way he does. I also love the scene where they... you know... the bond he has with her is beautiful. I absolutely love your story.

mkwiant 2012.10.06 - 11:40PM 38: Chapter 39 Signed
Wonderful Chapter - I love the ending. Severus co mforted by Remus. I can't e wait to read more. I hope you finish the story. It looks like you leave off at the end. I really hope this isn't an abandoned fic. You really did a great job on this.

mkwiant 2012.10.06 - 05:39PM 27: Chapter 28 Signed
I dearly hope she doesn't die in the end!

mkwiant 2012.10.06 - 02:30PM 27: Chapter 28 Signed
So let me correct myself. Your last love scene was... well, after I read it my response was... Jesus. lol. I love Olivia's spunk! Can't wait to read more!

mkwiant 2012.10.05 - 10:28PM 24: Chapter 25 I think Signed
I tried to get on your yahoo group to view the pics... of Alan. You lucky duck. I imagine you were in heaven - that voice!

mkwiant 2012.10.05 - 05:06PM 19: Coming Together At Last Signed
Good Job on the love scene - just a note. It doesn't seem like she's... reaching her peak.. if you know what I mean. She should either come before him or with him. It seems like he's a selfish lover, and i know you don't intend for that. So have her shout too and her body clench... or something. Anyway, sorry for the critique. I do love your story and the way you write!

mkwiant 2012.10.04 - 08:14PM 6: Chapter 6 Signed
two words... sexual tension - and you know how to write it. WOW

mkwiant 2012.10.04 - 07:52PM 5: Chapter 5 Signed
WHEW... but can you write Snape. I love your characterization. I can't wait to read more. I'm intreagued about their past, and I love the idea of Olivia being McGonnagall's daughter!

Mistris mayhem 2012.02.10 - 09:23PM 43: Wisdom Exceeds Folly Signed
NOOOOO... PLEASE COME BACK. please dont abandon this story. i just found it last night, and have been neglecting my life to read this, its really good. PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!

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