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Reviews for Lost in Time

redvelvetcanopy 2005.07.28 - 11:54AM 2: Journeys and Messages Signed
Finn Mac Cumhail sounds so very charming and dashing. I can see why Sorcha is being tempted by him. It is interesting to note too, that Finn seems to think a bit more highly of Sorcha, and give her a bit more respect, than Severus does. I can't say I blame her for at least wanting more of that! I love your description of ancient Hogwarts. It is enchanting!

Author's Response: I think I ruined Finn - how can he be this great warrior and so desirable at the same time? However, I quite like him this way so he's staying put! You will be seeing alot more of different place and god only knows how much I pine for description! Thank you so very much!

greenwood 2005.07.27 - 11:01AM 2: Journeys and Messages Anonymous
Well, that was good I must say. Salazar Slytherin as an Elf...I didn't see that coming but your logic was pretty sound. If you take the Lord of the Rings into account, yes I do believe that wizards decended from Elves (I should ask my hubby - he would know the answer to that one!) But a good line to take it. I still think you are too brief in your scene developement and engaging emotion from the reader but, hay, who am I to say! I still like the story and it has such possibilities, I hope you continue writing.

Author's Response: I confessor to a long love of Tolkein and I've read most of his works in depth. The Silmarillion gave me insight into the creation story of middle earth and much of my loose imagination begins there. I'm definately taking on your suggestion for scene development, I will try my best to incorporate it into future chapters - thank you for highlighting that. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

Greyfalcon 2005.07.24 - 11:09PM 2: Journeys and Messages Signed
I ave enjoyed your story so far, but I must admit to a bit of confusion.. the second chapter makes this story seem like a sequel to another one, do you have one posted somewhere else or are we going to find out the past between Severus and his wife through flashbacks or memories?

Author's Response: It is a sequel - I apologise! The first story is under redevelopment, though is posted on Mugglenet (and is still not finished..) I do plan on posting it here as soon as its been revamped - its dismally pathetic as it stands. I'll post it as soon as it is ready! I'm really glad you've enjoyed it! Thank you!

Author's Response: Incidently if you wish to read what is posted of the first story you can find it here: Snape, Crackle and Pop!

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