Reviews for Mastermind
||2007.04.26 - 09:24PM
|I've read this a couple of times, but never reviewed. I thought it was very well done, and even holds up after you know the "twist". The details were masterfully arranged (such as Lucius' muggle clothing). It would be interesting to see how Lucius and Hermione deal with his madness (or possible cure?) in a sequel. Their interaction at the end was very intriguing. |
||2006.02.12 - 06:54PM
|Oh snap! Love the end! It took me a while to get it, but once I di I was speechless. |
Author's Response: Thanks. I love twists and I think this came out rather as a surprise :D
||2005.07.06 - 10:49AM
|Good twist at the end. You really had me going there! Well done.|
Author's Response: Ooops. Embarrasing. A bit late with an answer here. Sorry.
I am glad that you think I managed to make a twist. Not much to the story without it ;0)
Thanks for the praise!
||2005.07.04 - 09:13PM
|What a twist of an ending! I never saw that coming. Bravo!|
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you didn't figure it in the middle of the fic ;0)
||2005.07.03 - 03:38AM
|Omigosh, what a twist!! So Severus is really in his own "alternate reality" - no hope for a cure? Severus does remember a little bit, like fighting alongside Lucius for the winning side, and Lucius changing sides. I thought for a bit that Bella was dead and Severus was really alone in the room, because it says they brought Bellatrix down in the final battle, but then Elizabeth says they're a lovely couple. Sigh... I don't want to think of Severus and Bella shagging under these circumstances. Scary! Thanks for sharing this. Will there be more chapters?|
Author's Response: I don't know if he'll be cured. He might - or not. The story simply ends at this point in his life. I think that Lucius' frequent visits and the fact that Severus hasn't completely and totally lost contact with reality might indicate that he's got a chance.
The problem is: What would Severus feel when he at last discovers that he had in fact lived in an AU for some - shorter or longer - time? Discovers that he'd been with Bella for this time?
Hmmm. I might try to write an epilogue or sequel. - And thanks, by the way for the praise.