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duj 2013.06.12 - 07:18AM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
The problem is you cheated. And it's very obvious that you cheated. Why would prefects leave the welcoming feast in the middle before they could hear Dumbledore's speech? They don't have any duties that require them to do so. They never do it in canon. Why, so that they can miss hearing his news and draw the wrong conclusions of course.

silvian_sicily0 2007.10.30 - 06:15PM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
Excellent! I loved it! It was really cute, and I really liked the little twist at the end.

xenasquill 2007.04.11 - 09:52PM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
Nice one! I enjoyed the humorous conversations of the Trio and the twist at the end. I liked the little clue of heels clicking as Professor Snape swept into the room in dark robes, even though I missed its implication until the very end!

Akinaria 2005.11.11 - 01:07PM 1: The Newlyweds Anonymous
This would be worth extending. The insertion of a sub-plot, or relegation of the relationship for a complex over-plot could open this up. You used language manipulatively enough that it could be good.

Verity Brown 2005.07.04 - 09:29PM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
ROFL! I was half-expecting that, but it was still funny. :~)

Apothecaria 2005.07.04 - 07:46PM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
Nice turnaround at the end! I take it the male Professor Snape finally got his DADA post. The trio are nicely I/C, what with Hermione knowing everything that's going on, and Ron making his usualy wisecracks. The banter between the students as they look at Mr and Mrs Snape at the head table is especially amusing.

phoenix 2005.07.04 - 02:10PM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
Well now, that was an interesting little twist. I honestly didn't see that one coming. I love how they are both tough on the students and have high expectations. It does seem fitting that he would marry someone with his high standards. Though she does seem to have a softer side from helping Ginny to actually complimenting the class. :) Great job.

Gina Potter 2005.07.03 - 10:55AM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
I liked the little twis at the end and I loved the fact that you didn't make Madam Snape some sweet woman, she certainly is a match for Snape. And is Severus Snape the new DADA teacher?

Sigune 2005.07.03 - 08:43AM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
Poor Harry! I don't think he would survive a year with TWO Snapes - one is really bad enough :-). You already knew that I am very fond of your Snape; now I find that I like your Trio too - Hermione's interpretation of Madam Snape's letter sounds very true (and funny), as does the rest of the students' conversation. I love your sense of fun!

I'm very happy to see you post at Occlumency, and I'll hope we'll read more of you here!


Samson28 2005.07.03 - 04:58AM 1: The Newlyweds Signed
*Snicker* I just knew she was teaching potions at the first complaint. Very much enjoyed.




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