Reviews for Unforgivable Lessons
phoenix |
2005.06.28 - 12:25PM |
1: A Surprise Visitor |
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I think you've captured Bella quite nicely. She always seemed a tad short of sane an I can definitely see here recruiting Severus. Of course, he's known for knowing all those curses and hexes so it makes sense that he would be interested in the Unforgiveables and this shows a great progression to him being a DE. Look forward to the next chapter and if he ever gets the upper hand on her.
Author's Response: This is not exactly going to be his finest hour, but he'll learn several of the things he's known for in later life :*) |
Verity Brown |
2005.06.28 - 12:36AM |
1: A Surprise Visitor |
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"Beautiful young women did not mysteriously appear in your bed, just when you could really use one -- not in any Snape-based reality." That is such a fun line! And you manage to be steamy and highly suggestive without being graphic--well done!
Author's Response: Snape-based realities must be pretty bizarre places, and not much fun to live in.
Maybe I had to poke a little fun at the non-Snape-based realities, the ones where he gets jumped by lovely young women all the time :*)
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mouse |
2005.06.27 - 11:53PM |
1: A Surprise Visitor |
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Ooh! I like this one! I look forward to seeing where this goes next. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was just the evil plot bunny that sunk it's fangs into my leg. And at least I'll have *something* finished before HBP is published. |
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