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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part One: Chronos Taxiclevo Filtro

Aurora Greyeyes 2006.09.18 - 01:11AM 19: The Fire Festival Signed
I normally only review at the end but I guess you will just have to get one a little early. The abuse scenes were too abrupt, it is your story if you cannot write it to make it fit in do something else in it's place instead. I'm sorry for having to tell you that. Now the likes I like your characters, alot. The main reason I wanted to write you here is the background info that you put into the story is great. I especially liked the Argentium sisters and they had silver hair too! If this is an accident lucky you. I seriously doubt it is so I am highly impressed. your plot bunnies deserve a carrot! give them a kiss and a scratch for me. May your bunnies always be hopping!

Author's Response: Awesome for me then. I'll work in the transition better, if I ever get out of my school work. I'm glad you liked my characters -- the bunnies loved me when I created them. *Bunnies hug Aurora* -Mel

Nilliem 2005.07.02 - 11:15PM 19: The Fire Festival Signed
Your insistence has worn me down! I'm reviewing long before I get to the end, a rarity. Its wonderful, and well done. I'm enjoying it immensely. I like your angst, your Kestrel and Snape as 'knight in shining...er black armor' is such fun.

Author's Response: *gasp* *SQUEEE* Thank you! You have no idea how much I appreciate that! *does another happy dance* I drank about four cups of coffee, please ignore me. *giggle* -Mel P.S. Cute little bunny eyes staring at you always works...*Snigger*

wytchkat 2005.06.26 - 10:54PM 19: The Fire Festival Signed
I think I like sevvie's aunt,ok,no scarf questions-but why did the veela chicks scowl at the work of cara?and why was fawkes there?does that mean albus lurks near?and why do they need the money? excellent chapter!

Author's Response: *promptly* 'Cause they don't like her. And Fawkes was there cause he's keeping an eye on 'em and they know it. Money for the expensive potion stuff in 21st chapter. Thank you! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.06.26 - 09:15PM 19: The Fire Festival Signed
My favorite version of 'The Odyssey' is the 1997 miniseries with Armand Assante as Odysseus, I love Armand Assante. When I saw 'O Brother, Where Art Thou' I was about half way into it before I realized it was a version of 'The Odyssey'. I think George Clooney gave a better performance in that movie than in any thing else I've seen him in, his mustache was to die for. Her sister and brother in law are not immune to a tumble under the bushes, well even if he can give her dentention in her own house he can't take points away from them. Snape does have a conscience, she's too young yet for him to court and he knows it. The Fire Festival sound like fun, I'd love to go sometime.

Author's Response: *Blink* *frowns* *thinks* Oh! I remember that! Well, sort of. I didn't exactly finish watching one single episode. *blushes* I'm not sure if the Fire Festival DOES exist, I based it on a gypsy rumor one of my friends said. *wrinkles nose* But I'd still like to go too. I gave him a conscience! Whoop! Go me! *grins* I'm glad you enjoyed my loooong chapter! -Mel




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