Reviews for The One Who Left Forever
phoenix |
2005.06.21 - 01:29PM |
1: The One Who Left Forever |
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Nicely written. I hope that something like this doesn't come to pass, but it is very plausible as we all try to unravel who the one that "left forever" is.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope it doesn't come to pass, too! (Sorry for the delay in responding!) |
Orangeblossom |
2005.06.20 - 04:34PM |
1: The One Who Left Forever |
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Again you have written a wonderful piece. You make the characters and the scenes come alive, and I really like the way you use words. Well done! |
greenwood |
2005.06.20 - 01:57PM |
1: The One Who Left Forever |
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WELL DONE! Your detailed attention to this scene has made it very real and quite fitting to the cannon story. Voldemort's thoughts about Severus and the other DE's are well in keeping with what we all think could have happened. The story flow and depth draw in the reader very well. Great Job!!
Author's Response: Tickled that you liked it--I always get very nervous about writing Voldy--like Severus, he's so complex, and I worry about doing him justice! :) |
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