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lesia 2005.06.28 - 11:28AM 1: One By One Anonymous
GO SEV!

Author's Response: LOL! (you like 'em evil, do ya?) :D

Grainne 2005.06.28 - 10:13AM 1: One By One Signed
Intense, chilling, and ever so satisfying. This was the story option that first caught my eye, but I didn't think I could pull it off in the time allotted. You've done it beautifully, and I now realise that what I wanted was to READ this story option, not to write it. Thank you, and congratulations on your win.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your very kind comments - I really liked your story too! (mental note: get my lazy bum over to Ashwinder and write a review for it) This story option caught my eye early on too, but I didn't like the romantic partner that was required. Then, about a month later, after I had been indulging my burgeoning addiction to SS/RL slash, I took another look at the option and realised that I knew what I wanted to do with it...

Thanks again for your review, and congratulations on your win as well!


Gannet 2005.06.26 - 07:56AM 1: One By One Signed
That was brilliant! Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Thank you for reviewing! :D

Deeble 2005.06.25 - 10:20PM 1: One By One Signed
Eeeek. I really, really hope this is not Snape as Rowling has envisioned him, but oh, it does work with canon, it does.

Nicely done.

Eeeek.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Wow; two "Eeeek"s. I think I'm blushing. :D I'm glad the story worked for you, but yes, let's hope that this ISN'T what JKR has planned for our Beloved Sallowness.


dua 2005.06.23 - 06:38PM 1: One By One Signed
I liked your evil Snape and this all-too-plausible account of the motives behind his actions. Enchantingly nasty.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it.

Vocalion 2005.06.23 - 11:33AM 1: One By One Signed
I much prefer redeemable Snape, but I find myself liking him in this because he formed such a beautiful plan. In fact, you've made me feel wicked for rooting for him. I never really subscribed to the "Pensieve was a set-up" theory until you presented your own spin on it here. Very nice take on this story option.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I prefer a redeemable Snape too, but this one was a lot of fun to write.

mwk 2005.06.23 - 10:16AM 1: One By One Signed
positively Machiavellian! I think you should have tied for grand prize on the Spring Faire award

Author's Response: Wow, that's such a kind thing to say! Thank you so much! The rest of the prize-winning stories are fantastic however (especially the grand prize winner), and I think I'm lucky my story got a mention at all, since it really doesn't fit the challenge requirements all that well. Thanks all the same!

Novinha 2005.06.23 - 08:00AM 1: One By One Signed
Dear mouse,

This was absolutely terrific. You managed to write it so that it truly sounded like Snape. You portrayed his hatred and obsession perfectly. You created a dark, perfectly angsty story which was a pleasure to read. I am in awe.

I especially love how he rationalises the types of punishment each of the Marauders deserved - and the end. It was just powerful.
Greetings from Poland,
Novinha

Author's Response: Thank you so much Novinha! That's very high praise! I'm very glad you liked the story, and thank you for telling me what you think worked. :D

Green Giraffe 2005.06.22 - 06:02PM 1: One By One Anonymous
This was such a great look at 'evil' snape's mind. I'm very impressed. I'm also a little chilled by the singlemindedness of Snape's plan for revenge. Good work.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for your very kind review.

QIK 2005.06.22 - 09:47AM 1: One By One Signed
Uh.... what an awful peace of shit Severus is. But I can absolutely understand that your story was prized, it's well-written and what delighted me the most: it fits canon so properly that I would never recognize that it's fan fiction. Although I don't think JKR would imply Snape using sex to gain power, it fits his persona absolutely well. I don't like his character in your fic because im craving for him being good, but I like the fic itself. Well done. I'll try to read your other stuff, too. Patrick

Author's Response: Ah yes, we all crave Snape turning out to be a good guy. I'm glad you're still willing to read my other stuff when you had such a negative reaction to the Snape in this one - thanks for your very kind comments!

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