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Reviews for A Change for the Better

phoenix 2005.07.12 - 11:22AM 1: A Change for the Better Signed
Very nicely done. I like how the first part was from Remus' point of view and then it shifted over to Severus'. I think it's a very plausibly written story, and as you said at the end, magic can be used much more viciously than trauma to inflict a seemingly intolerable state on someone.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I think both points of view were needed to make the reader see the relationship was truly built on mutual feelings (although at first I wanted to make it a nasty fic in which Severus doesn't love Remus at all, honestly! *lol*).

Samson28 2005.06.19 - 04:46AM 1: A Change for the Better Signed
A heartwarming but heartbreaking ending to the war. Hard hitting story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hoped to evoke exactly these feelings in the readers ;)

Rogue4211 2005.06.16 - 10:43PM 1: A Change for the Better Signed
I simply loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review :)

Silverthreads 2005.06.15 - 11:00PM 1: A Change for the Better Signed
I think I read this before? Or somewhere else? In any case, I find it very compelling and very moving.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. You might have read it on ff.net - I've posted it there, too.

Vaughn 2005.06.14 - 09:06PM 1: A Change for the Better Signed
This is an amazing story, and it is one of those few that I can read more than once and still be awed by. You have painted a bittersweet yet hopeful picture with your words, and more importantly, it rings true.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words - I feel honoured to know there are people out there who like my writing that much.

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