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Reviews for Shadow on My Heart

greenwood 2008.09.05 - 01:46AM 1: Prologue Signed
Just picked up this story (haven't been on occlumency for a while) and this first chapter is wonderful. I seem to recall this story title but not that it was ever completed? Anyway It is very well done and I will savor reading it chapter by chapter.

inverness 2008.08.25 - 01:38PM 5: Tangling the Web Signed
Really,I love how you write Snape,he's so much more in character than in many other fics!Don't forget to update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! If there's one thing that makes me want to scream it's an OOC Snape. Hope to hear from you again.

Trickie Woo 2008.08.22 - 10:41PM 5: Tangling the Web Signed
I'm pleased to see you got this posted, I've been wondering about it. I think it does work better in separate chapters like this.

jollygood 2008.07.27 - 06:18PM 1: Prologue Signed
Oh, definitely looking forward to this one. *rubs hands*

Author's Response: And more has been added for your reading enjoyment. At least I hope you enjoy it.

johnbly341 2008.07.22 - 07:33PM 4: Unavoidable Encounters Signed
Very enjoyable...I really like your portrayal of Severus.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I continue to do Snape's character justice.

Verity Brown 2008.05.03 - 03:43PM 3: Chapter 2: Unexpected Reunion Signed
I wonder...how has Callista gotten to know Harry well enough to make assessments of his character and abilities in the short time since she got back? I love the interplay between the various characters, though--sent to "fetch" Snape. :~)

Author's Response: I couldn't resist the pooch comments! ^.^

Verity Brown 2008.05.03 - 03:22PM 2: Chapter 1: Interviews Signed
I love Minvera's reaction! But I'm confused about the business of dividing the posts. Or rather, I'm confused about the concerns about the students. Surely Callista is competent to teach upper-level Potions?

Author's Response: She probably could muddle through it, but speaking as someone who has been stuck trying to teach something one is barely qualified to teach *cough*chemistry*cough*, she's better off not teaching the upper levels. Prepping students for exams is best done by someone who knows what he's doing, and for both subjects Snape is clearly the expert. Good luck with the rest of your epilogue! *hugs*

Verity Brown 2008.05.03 - 03:11PM 1: Prologue Signed
I like what you've done with this. It's a little slower to get moving than the previous version, but we get to see more of Callista's situation--she's not a mystery woman anymore. Well done!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Hopefully this de-Sues her a bit. then again, aren't all OFC's Sues to some extent? The fandom can be so unkind to them. ;-)

Trickie Woo 2008.05.02 - 05:14PM 3: Chapter 2: Unexpected Reunion Signed
I read it and sent you an email about a few things. I enjoyed the chapter, it does set things up better than in the original version. It also sets a more definite time frame, when I think back to the original I can't place the exact time frame. I had always pictured Callista as a blonde, it wasn't until Prof Blackburn called her the 'dark headed girl' that I realized she was a brunette.

inverness 2008.04.23 - 11:34AM 2: Chapter 1: Interviews Signed
I love the way you write Snape-it's definitly CanonSnape.I'm rather tired of the frock coat with the many buttons.Waiting for the following installments...

Author's Response: The buttons are nice, but they aren't canon. There is more to come, I promise.

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