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Reviews for Shadow on My Heart

snapehp 2006.01.25 - 03:28PM 1: Signed
Sorry about the late reply, I have been away for a few weeks. Great poetry! It makes me giggle every time I read it. I wish Moody would keep his crazy eye out of other people's business. Severus and Callista's first kiss was sweet...I really feel bad for the both of them...how frustrating it must be for them. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Welcome back, snapehp! I hope the few weeks away were for something fun. So the poetry wasn't too awful :) Thank you for appreciating their first kiss. It's not exactly a lemon, but I wanted something romantic in the chapter. Sorry, but Moody isn't finished being a pain in the rear yet.

Owlbait 2006.01.22 - 08:30PM 1: Signed
I love the bit about the peacock quills -- a fine tribute to Gilderoy!

Author's Response: Welcome back, Owlbait! I just had to throw in some Lockhart bashing.

Marianne 2006.01.16 - 11:25AM 1: Signed
I am glad that they did not part without saying that they love each other. Severus is a master of getting things wrong. Thank you!

Author's Response: Vielen Dank für Überprüfen! One thing that I have been trying to keep true to the nature of Snape (as I see him) is that he comes across as someone who is emotionally stunted.

greenwood 2006.01.13 - 10:35PM 1: Signed
Well, then lets keep feeding them reviews! (*snort*) As usual, great chapter! I love the visual created when Harry walked in on them (Severus starkers...great image) and the angry dialog after. Please keep it coming! It was good to let the bunnies out for a shag...they needed it!

Author's Response: Thanks for feeding us!~ LW's Plot Bunnies Cute little things aren't they?

Trickie Woo 2006.01.13 - 02:59PM 1: Signed
It was a very good lemon. I do wish they could have gotten in that second piece though, before Harry found them.This means that the sexual tension has only been released enough to give them a small reprieve, it will now build up even stronger. Add that to the additional stress and danger of Harry knowing about it and it makes for an explosive situation, all it needs is Neville to set it off. When she delicately wiped the corner of her mouth was it because of what I think it was, or do I just have a dirty mind? I liked Winky's comment about his wardrobe, I'm sure nobody ever notices when he changes his clothes. The best line in the chapter though is "His personal preference would be killing the meddlesome little whelp.", that one made me laugh out loud. What a shame that neither one of them has enough experience with Obliviation to use the spell, it would have solved the whole thing nicely and Harry, the little...the big pain in the ass, could go on his merry, clueless way. Maybe Dumbledore could Obliviate it from Harry's mind, I'm sure that what Harry saw will in some way get back to Voldie, and he's even more tiresome and a bigger pain in the ass to deal with than Harry is.

Author's Response: Thanks for helping with this chapter, Trickie Woo. I intentionally keep the lemons rather vague so you can let your mind be as dirty or clean as you want it to be. ;) Harry isn't that big of a pain... well maybe he is. No Dumbledore probably won't Obliviate him either.

MelanieHill 2006.01.13 - 11:52AM 1: Signed
Yeah! Another chapter. I could just imagine the look on Harry's face when he walked in on them! Oh well, that's what happens when men think with the wrong head.... I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: As a mom, you learn the importance of locking the door ;) Enjoy your weekend!

amycnorm98 2006.01.13 - 11:04AM 1: Signed
Great chapter, I could almost feel their mutual embarassment...ewe! Very sweet and passionate make-up scene though between Calista and Severus.

Author's Response: I felt pretty bad for the intruder. :) Always lock the door! Those two really can't stay angry at each other for very long.

MelanieHill 2006.01.07 - 08:16PM 1: Signed
A dark place with lots of dark corners for doing dark deeds I could not stop reading. It flows so wonderfully! I love getting lost in a story. My heart freezes, as must Callista's, whenever Severus is called to his "Dark Master". It will be a good day when he is no longer around. I so look forward to more chapters and to see how it ends! Keep up the wonderful work, and may your plot bunnies get nice and fat and fluffly! (Your poetry was rather cute at the start ;) ) MH

Author's Response: Glad to hear that you fell in love with my little story. with all of these new reviews the bunnies are putting on weight nicely. You found the correct line, yea! Love, Actually is my second favorite Rickman film. Sadly, we haven't seen the last of the Dark Lord. :( Thank you for the compliment on my poetry. LW

MelanieHill 2006.01.07 - 08:10PM 1: Signed
They just can’t seem to deal with eachother without hurting one another. I’m looking forward to seeing how long they stay locked in the office together.

MelanieHill 2006.01.07 - 08:09PM 1: Signed
I love the way I get lost in the story. I am so glad Callista stayed with him while he healed.

Author's Response: Welcome to the SoMH family. It does the heart good to see a new name on the thread.

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