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Rose of the West 2009.06.08 - 10:16PM 9: A Change in Plans Signed
I see your belief that Severus somehow allowed/encouraged Barty to be kissed and raise you that it was with Dumbledore's approbation. Interesting background on their attraction for each other.

Author's Response: Darn, the one thing you bring up that I can't confirm or deny.

kerisk 2009.04.27 - 02:03AM 8: Shadows of Doubt Signed
Wow, Snape is really pissed at Castilla...how long will it take for him to get over it? So far she doesn't seem really too mad at him, sounds like Snape will have to sweeten up, or be a little less crabby. Keep it coming when you can, its been fun!

Author's Response: When have we ever known Snape to get over being pissed at anyone? ;-) It warms the heart and motivates the plot bunnies to her from happy readers.

Rose of the West 2009.04.26 - 10:48PM 8: Shadows of Doubt Signed
The reasoning behind why they didn't get together in the past is becoming clearer. Her parents obviously would not have been in favor of the match. I hope she doesn't just take Winky's word for what happened to Barty. Winky never quite gets a story straight in canon, either.

Author's Response: Good call! Callista's parents did in fact agree with some of Voldemort's ideology, and wanted to see their only daughter make a 'nice, respectable pure blood match.' However they didn't agree with the extermination of the Muggle race. Trust me, Callista isn't going to brush what happened to her friend under the rug and forget about it.

makaem 2009.04.26 - 09:41PM 8: Shadows of Doubt Signed
This is so good. Her parents were interesting (thought I'd be nice). Wonder what they thought of Dumbledore's blood status? Will you have Dumbledore explain what Winky told her? What was Barty about to say to upset Snape? Was it about her? Winky doesn't seem to blame Fudge? Is that the result of her former master's opinions regarding blood status? Winky's attitude made me think of Kreacher when he talked about Draco.

Author's Response: LOL There is so much I want to tell you but can't or it will spoil you! Let's just leave it at: M/M Hawkins admired Dumbledore's genius but wouldn't have exactly been thrilled to have him marry into the family, a talkative Moody/Barty would have had a significant impact on canon, and Winky is a definitely a product of her circumstances. See you next chapter!

Rose of the West 2009.04.03 - 04:31PM 7: Rare Ingredient Signed
This chapter really establishes the two personalities, how they're compatible, and how they clash because they're so similar. Intriguing, and fun.

Author's Response: Glad to see you're enjoying this, Rose. There will continue to be a good deal of clashing in future chapters.

inverness 2009.03.12 - 07:09AM 6: Return to Hogwarts Signed
I'm glad you updated again.I love how you write Snape.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Rose of the West 2009.03.11 - 11:58PM 6: Return to Hogwarts Signed
I was put onto this story by several sources and so disappointed that you had removed most of it from the various archives where it was posted. I'm glad you're putting it back up. I like Callista and the bits of the past we've seen so far. I look forward to what is coming next.

Author's Response: Trust me, this is much better than the original. Unfortunately I wrote myself into a corner so to speak and I had to go back and fix it. That, and it was a bit wearing to hear about how much of a Mary Sue my OC was.

greenwood 2008.09.05 - 08:28PM 5: Tangling the Web Signed
Well, I wonder what that flash was all about...a photograph perhaps? I was glad Severus didn't partake of the offer from the blond. My hope is for Callista and Severus to finally make it as an item. But I love the dramatic tension and can't wait until the defining moment when they like each other again! Keep writing and I will be on the look out for additions.

Author's Response: Don't worry things will eventually work out for them, but it will take some time. This won't be one of those fics were the main characters are ripping each other's clothes off early in the story.

greenwood 2008.09.05 - 08:08PM 4: Unavoidable Encounters Signed
Well it looks like poor Snape has no one in his corner! After reading this chapter and mulling over the previous ones, I get this heavy feeling that Lucus is Lucius Malfoy and that some how Callista's healing backgroud and potions skills will be coming in handy some where down the line. I also get a feeling that the mini-me portrait will play some vital roll in Severus' favor. I really look forward to more.

Author's Response: Keep in mind Callista knew Lucius Malfoy from before, so, no, they aren't the same person. Don't worry, there will eventually be more of Mr. Hart in other chapters.

greenwood 2008.09.05 - 06:13PM 2: Chapter 1: Interviews Signed
Another well done chapter. I can just imagine what Severus is going say when he is asked by Albus to split the teaching of the DADA with another (and not just any "other") teacher! Fireworks is not even close. And just what he will say when he finds out why she can't teach the entire subject will be roof lifting to say the least.

Author's Response: He's not going to be thrilled about it and it will factor into the story later on. Thanks for sticking with me!

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