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Reviews for Shadow on My Heart

SnarkyCharms 2010.09.01 - 01:26AM 11: Arrivals and Introductions Signed
wow It's been so long since I've read any good OFC fics, and I'm certainly enjoying this one. The detail to cannon is wonderful and whatever details you create on your own are more than agreeable, and I especially love Callista. I do hope you update soon. PS The only eye-rolling I did here was purely for the sake of strengthening my superior oblique muscles.

Rose of the West 2010.02.03 - 11:31PM 12: Digging for Information Signed
I know this chapter kicked your butt a lot, but I think that argument came out well. The one during Slughorn's party in the canon is clearly a continuation of a long-term disagreement and this was a good opening salvo of that. The beginning of this chapter was like a tasty Margarita... Once they start dreaming like that, they're in serious trouble.

Rose of the West 2009.09.24 - 10:45PM 11: Arrivals and Introductions Signed
No eye rolling here. I can only imagine what life would have been like at the Hawkins table at holidays, with one brother in each house like that. I've personally always bought into the fanon that suggests James and Sirius went into Auror training until the prophecy made it too dangerous for James and Lily to live openly, myself. It's nice to see that your two main characters can have an interaction without drawing wands on each other once in a while...

makaem 2009.07.22 - 08:41AM 10: A Battle of Wits Begins Signed
It is probably good you didn't know about Slughorn. With Callista's connections and her own talents, the entire story would have been his fawning. There wouldn't have been room for anything else. Snape's really an ass. Is that going to work itself out, or will Dumbledore have to intervene?

LunaSnape 2009.07.15 - 10:47PM 10: A Battle of Wits Begins Signed
You gotta love the URST!!! I am really trying to remember the story from the first draft and if I remember correctly I like winky... hmmm I don't remember why but I do lol. Thank you for a great chapter, and keep them coming!

LunaSnape 2009.07.15 - 12:40AM 4: Unavoidable Encounters Signed
I for one would not like a portrait of my father anywhere near my living quarters ;P And, was it just me, or did Mom bleep out everything Callista said?

LunaSnape 2009.07.15 - 12:11AM 2: Chapter 1: Interviews Signed
Alright, so I am completely in love with this revision! I am so glad you came back! P.S. i was reading the other reviews for this chapter and am VERY glad to hear it's not DH compliant... I wanted to slap JKR for screwing (not in the good way) our Potions Master over!

LunaSnape 2009.07.14 - 11:54PM 1: Prologue Signed
Hmm, well. I haven't been on here in a long time but I could have sworn I've read this fic b4 and I don't remember this chapter at all hahaha. But- I liked it! I just thought I'd stop b4 I (re?)read the other revised chapters and say what ever you are doing is very well done! Ok. time to read somemore :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm reworking the original story I started posting between OotP and HBP, fixing all of the things that didn't work as well as I wanted them to. It's been a lot of work, but if people are enjoying it, then it's worth every minute I put into it.

Rose of the West 2009.07.14 - 12:00AM 10: A Battle of Wits Begins Signed
Wow, they're pretty cold to each other. I have to wonder why either would see a value in picking a fight just for the sake of making the other mad. I'm imagine I'll understand it better later on.

Trickie Woo 2009.06.09 - 06:12PM 9: A Change in Plans Signed
I agree with Rose and I'll raise the bet even higher, I think it was at Dumbledore's instigation. After all he does feel that the ends justify the means and he wants to protect Severus's cover. I wanted to go through my documents to see exactly what I said when I beta read it, but it doesn't show up in the files that were restored on my new computer, so I must have stored it on my husband's computer. I do remember saying that I found Callista quite unlikable in this chapter. I never did ask you, how close is this revision going to follow the original in certain details? I think you know what particular detail I mean, but I won't mention the exact one to keep from being a spoiler.

Author's Response: Of course if Snape's cover gets blown, he ends up dead. Sorry you fell out of like with Callista in this chapter, but only a complete MarySue would suddenly shrug off the past and jump in his bed. I'm really trying not to go the Mary Sue route. PM/email me, because I'm not 100% sure which details you're talkig about and I don't want to spoil anything either.

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